it's rare for a good jjk fic and from you author I can only imagine it being good
8 months ago
27
CouchPotatoDandy
No originality whatsoever the author of this fanfic just follows the anime 99% of the story.
No new arcs or events happening, the MC who got reincarnated acts as if he is Yuji.
I am too disappointed.
Except for the writing quality which I will give five star, everything else received one star.
2 months ago
24
firat_Vural
A whole lot of yuji glazing but i am all for it
3 months ago
14
JapaOuO
The story is very good! I recommend it to anyone who wants to read it! I think the only point that didn't make the story 5 stars for me but 4.6 is because the story has no stability in writing and the author hasn't updated for more than 20 days.....
7 months ago
12
theanimemail
So, I'd sadly not recommend reading this: the story's pacing is absurd (seriously, this was just bad storytelling), the characters are about as bland as they come, scene and character description are almost completely absent, and the author is thinking about accelerating the pacing even more (I'm on chapter 13).
I'm kinda annoyed that I got my expectations up when reading the first chapter; it had pretty good spelling, an enjoyable writing style, and was just... interesting.
3 months ago
11
CrazeR
mc is beta when its came to nobara. simp
3 months ago
10
THII_EXTERNAL
Didn't had any hope but man, the fights are done great yes sometimes pacing is just fine but NOT BAD, yuji has very well developed character in here, realistic THERE IS ONLY 1 PROBLEM, give other chracter more depth i mean you already have with their fights but try to slow down a little giving the reader more about their personal views and day to day problems it will help them connect better, (STILL TOP LEVEL JJK FAN-FIC)
a month ago
6
Amir_
Keep updating and this'll be a gem.
8 months ago
6
a_fool
good story. really interesting. only problem i have is the inconsistent uploading and the fact that the author cant get genders right. good story would recommend otherwise
Я уже ранее писал отзыв, но решил немного его отредактировать. Ваша работа действительно интересна - я искал не мало рассказов по JJK или с самоставкой, но ваша, на мой взгляд, одна из лучших. Не могу дать комментарий по поводу орфографии или пунктуации, так как сам читаю работу, переведенную на русский язык. Поэтому автор, тебе вдохновения, и чтобы все у тебя было хорошо. И большое спасибо за работу, которая даёт возможность отдохнуть
a month ago
3
Alfiemooon
The biggest problem is that it reads like a translation, or perhaps the authors first language isn't english. There are loads of inconsistencies with the characters- speech being the biggest. Gojo speaks OOC, the MC overcomplicating sentences etc. It's a glaring issue, but one you can sort of ignore if you try hard enough.
5 months ago
3
Dammo_Ndri
l'histoire est bonne etr les interactions sont plutot bonnes on s'en bien quil reste une part de yugi en lui car certaines partie jai limpression de voir un meilleur version de yugi ou si yugi avait ete mieux prepare
a month ago
2
DaoistecHHwN
Bien bien gracias por el capítulo y la familia no me deja entrar a las 2 de mi jente de mi parte de mi parte de mi parte de mi parte de la risa de mi vida en el cole de mi vida no puedo hablar contigo y me da la razón si te parece que no me deja el móvil en el metro y no tengo nada de tiempo de
a month ago
2
ArthasV2
Holy moly, this guy is cooking...... The story keeps getting better
it's rare for a good jjk fic and from you author I can only imagine it being good
No originality whatsoever the author of this fanfic just follows the anime 99% of the story. No new arcs or events happening, the MC who got reincarnated acts as if he is Yuji. I am too disappointed. Except for the writing quality which I will give five star, everything else received one star.
A whole lot of yuji glazing but i am all for it
The story is very good! I recommend it to anyone who wants to read it! I think the only point that didn't make the story 5 stars for me but 4.6 is because the story has no stability in writing and the author hasn't updated for more than 20 days.....
So, I'd sadly not recommend reading this: the story's pacing is absurd (seriously, this was just bad storytelling), the characters are about as bland as they come, scene and character description are almost completely absent, and the author is thinking about accelerating the pacing even more (I'm on chapter 13). I'm kinda annoyed that I got my expectations up when reading the first chapter; it had pretty good spelling, an enjoyable writing style, and was just... interesting.
mc is beta when its came to nobara. simp
Didn't had any hope but man, the fights are done great yes sometimes pacing is just fine but NOT BAD, yuji has very well developed character in here, realistic THERE IS ONLY 1 PROBLEM, give other chracter more depth i mean you already have with their fights but try to slow down a little giving the reader more about their personal views and day to day problems it will help them connect better, (STILL TOP LEVEL JJK FAN-FIC)
Keep updating and this'll be a gem.
good story. really interesting. only problem i have is the inconsistent uploading and the fact that the author cant get genders right. good story would recommend otherwise
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Я уже ранее писал отзыв, но решил немного его отредактировать. Ваша работа действительно интересна - я искал не мало рассказов по JJK или с самоставкой, но ваша, на мой взгляд, одна из лучших. Не могу дать комментарий по поводу орфографии или пунктуации, так как сам читаю работу, переведенную на русский язык. Поэтому автор, тебе вдохновения, и чтобы все у тебя было хорошо. И большое спасибо за работу, которая даёт возможность отдохнуть
The biggest problem is that it reads like a translation, or perhaps the authors first language isn't english. There are loads of inconsistencies with the characters- speech being the biggest. Gojo speaks OOC, the MC overcomplicating sentences etc. It's a glaring issue, but one you can sort of ignore if you try hard enough.
l'histoire est bonne etr les interactions sont plutot bonnes on s'en bien quil reste une part de yugi en lui car certaines partie jai limpression de voir un meilleur version de yugi ou si yugi avait ete mieux prepare
Bien bien gracias por el capítulo y la familia no me deja entrar a las 2 de mi jente de mi parte de mi parte de mi parte de mi parte de la risa de mi vida en el cole de mi vida no puedo hablar contigo y me da la razón si te parece que no me deja el móvil en el metro y no tengo nada de tiempo de
Holy moly, this guy is cooking...... The story keeps getting better