[VRMMO] Dead One

The first 4 chapters were interesting without wanting for information. So far the MC hasn't shown signs that he will be strong and is training to increase levels, without those golden finger clichés

Haven’t seen a story like this we’re two characters are seen with their separate point of view going against each othe. This story is very good am I can’t wait to see how it progresses keep up the good work

it's just not hitting,the focus on finding people who wont't betray them is stupid and their trust in each other is suspicious,the way the MC acts doesn't really give me a villian vibe just a spoiled brat that lost his toy and wants to get revenge kinda petty and i have read the novel he was betrayed tired of being a good guy and wants to be a bad guy in a videogame

Story has good plot and good world building. Poor grammar but neverthless enjoyable. The story is more focused on skills and stats don't produce any superhuman bullshit (Atleast I didn't get the stat growth "feel" of the character).

harem?..................................

muito bom, mas senti falta de desenvolvimento dos outros membros da guilda, até onde eu li n foi revelado quase nada sobre eles

currently at chapter 62 and I really like the story and it's a real villain story with not an overpowered but stong mc but the writing is difficult to read like decrease is decrees but you get used to

grammar needs work not the worst by far but not great either other than that a great read give it a go

até onde eu cap~100 senti falta de personagens com formas mais bizarras, como os personagens de overlord, tirando isso eu gostei muito

Great step by step on how I became The final boss villain. Nothing is black and white, the whole story is colored Grey. explains both sides. The MC the few described black makes you wanting to read more

so honestly, it has a lot of potential. it has quite a number of spelling issues. along with the story rapidly, time scaling. other than that, the character building is great, and class trees seem very balanced.