THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

this is the Author, my novel is based on suspense. so please don't be so rude to discredit me claiming that you don't understand the novel while you read 3 chapters. for the others who support me happy reading.

First I need everyone to know that the writing style of the author is probably the best I have ever read on WebNovel. The entire novel is so well written and so detailed that you can easily picture the scenes as you read. The characters are wonderful, with realistic personalities and thoughts. Just in the first 50 chapters I have watched the MC grow with his circumstances evolving into the "Apex Predator" he is becoming. The characters around him also have their own personalities special traits that make them more interesting instead of feeling like bots implanted. I couldn't be more happy with this story and author, he seems to understand what true fantasy/action/magic/isekai readers want in a novel with those main tags. He hasn't given into the complaints by the same people (Harem Haters) who never continue supporting any novel regardless of harem or not. I predict this story will be in the top 5 by the time it hits 300 chapters. So come read this incredible story and support.

Story could be good but excessive impossible to read formatting issues that haven’t been fixed in a month, not sure if the author eventually figured out what was causing them so they don’t happen later but it’s impossible to read as the text is forced to a small size and fixed color and doesn’t respond to the app theme info. Sounds like WebNovel support sucks at helping them fix… but I dropped due to this, which is sad as was enjoyable beyond that.

Now this is what i call a good novel! The world building peak, action amazing and the culture supreme. thank you author for the novel give us more chapters please.

First off, the story itself it very good. The only problem I have with it is how descriptive it is. It is almost like the author took a thesaurus and word vomited on the page. It almost feels like searching for word count by overly describing the most mundane details. Again the story is good. It’s just the writing is difficult to stomach sometimes.

Author knows why . Fix your chapters before uploading.

It is an engaging and unique fantasy novel. The plot of David manipulating the world he's transported into is captivating. The antihero theme adds depth, though some pacing issues and predictability detract slightly. Overall, it's a thrilling read that keeps you hooked. looking forward for new updates

The fact that it takes a lot of skill to create true[img=gift]beauty is understatement of how much hardwork and ingenuity put into this wonderful book...Keep Going!!!❤️🙏🏽🇰🇪

I love this . keep it up author. I'm so hooked 🇰🇪

The story is good, i just hope that it won't get dropped.

Damn the writing quality gave me a headache.

The author making 1 giant paragraph or swapping the letter type in the novel is killing it for me so I’m out

well written and paced book, good intrigue and strong mc. not going to go on depth and spoil it, just five in and enjoy

Good overall. Lots is small plots with no reaction or results.