Sword Art Online: Aincrad's Hollow Fragment

Sword Art Online: Aincrad's Hollow Fragment

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Author: Michael_Daigle_6817
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Set in the world of Reki Kawahara's "Sword Art Online", this story will follow a new player to the game: Kazzu Akihiko aka the co-creator of Sword Art Online and the son of the game's creator: Kayaba Akihiko. This journey will break through the original timeline and explore its own what if story. What if some of the casualties of the original timeline never happened at all? What if certain groups of players decided to band together instead of fight amongst themselves? What if one player, surrounded by friends, family, enemies, and traitors, conquered all 100 floors of Castle Aincrad and discovered hidden secrets buried deep within?



Taking inspiration from the manga, anime and video game series, follow Kazzu as he fights his way through the digital hell known as Sword Art Online in an attempt to repair the fractures of the game and most importantly: make it out alive.

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Shin_Chan_5334
Shin_Chan_5334

okay so i read it and it's not very good. My main issues are 2. First it follows the original plot way too much almost like he's just replacing kirito. Second, he's taking too much blame on himself even when he's not at fault and that is most annoying. He seems like a little girl crying at every second thing. His personality is meh at best. I don't know if you plan to change that as character development or this is what you're going to stick with, either way, I'm out. See ya and good luck

2 months ago
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Caesar_8551
Caesar_8551

there are not enough good Kirito stories why introduce oc with any consistance, background plagiarizing Kirito for ass harem "reasons"? Me also, I can fo the same, introduces oc and plagiarizing Kirito, kick Kirito from his OWN events because an ass harem lol. You could write Kirito directly rather a pale pathetic clone in this case. 🤭 another garbage good for oblivion.

2 days ago
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Shin_Chan_5334
Shin_Chan_5334

Hi This is just a preliminary review I've only read the prologue and I'm interested in the story. I saw that there are no reviews or power stones. Please don't feel disheartened and continue the story. I'm gonna read the hell out of it 😂. Good luck and keep going man.

2 months ago
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