High School DxD: The Game Master

This is written really well and could potentially be a great story but its not for me. The MC panders mostly to Rias and peerage way to much, I feel like the focus isn't the MC but just convenient ways for Rias's very very slow power-up.

50 chapters but still focused on rias like he needs to make up for her,, too much pussy mc, i would rather see other factions know about it and see the chaos that it creates

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Would really like to see less info dumo and more dialogues, more characters interacting with each other, more reactions, more lines instead of thoughts and some easy to miss important story parts. More area discriptions and more about the feel of the dungeons. Maybe include some basic ish stats fore game like worlds insife and maybe basic ish pun like character panels.

This is entraining and I like his powers they are very creative but I do think he needs to find other characters to get energy from instead of Risa and her friend

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