In a normal world we wish for an abnormal life and in an abnormal world we wish for a normal life .

Kevin a teenager is chosen to become the new four swords master but will he live up to the title.

Legend of the four sword master

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the story is readable but I still feel like it lacks something I like, which is the big battle! I hope you continue working! toward it
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From my perspective, your story has a strong foundation with its classic hero’s journey setup. Kevin’s role as the chosen Four Swords Master gives the story a sense of destiny and responsibility, which can be compelling if developed well.  

However, the novel could benefit from more polished writing and deeper world-building. The pacing should allow readers to connect with Kevin’s struggles and victories rather than rushing through key moments. 

Additionally, expanding on the lore behind the Four Swords Master could add more depth to the story.  

Overall, it’s a promising concept, but its impact depends on execution. Don't worry author, don't be pressure on what I said, cause I also need to improve with mine, just want to point out and help someone I know who also need to stand out through his/her work. You deserve such, as you also work hard in your passions and creation. Keep up, your wonderful work, author!

Kevin just can’t catch a break can he?! I’m rooting for him!

I don’t read many books, but when I started reading this one, I found it relatable. Chapter 1 had a great hook. I can’t judge the book yet, but you should keep it up. Don’t worry about what others say—just focus on your story.

I appreciate stories just like yours, in which someone goes from zero to hero, to carry on the title, the legacy he has been chosen for! Great work  👍

Beautifully written, this is one of the best story I have read so far. Kudos to the author 👍

Quite engaging, wish more of the mc's background covered😊. Keep going!

Interesting story! It has a lot of potential, keep going author! Can’t wait for the next chapters. 

Wow 😲 Amazing and interesting I just love everything about it I'm already hook from the first chapter

I am not a fan of stories like this but I thnk I am going to be one from today on, because this story is intriguing, even if it is still just 7 chapters, more update pls.

The plot and story was engaging and readable.
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You know something funny when I read your description my first thought was the AVATAR 💁🏾‍♀️💁🏾‍♀️💁🏾‍♀️☺️ sorry it just sounded kind similar  I like your synopsis. You have an intriguing story here something different and rare, very interesting I like it.

An impressive work with beautiful world building and nice character design. Kudos to you

A good domain.   The book is  great except for few errors.