A Hand-Woven Universe

Hi everyone! Lukis_Aurelius here, Author of A Hand-Woven Universe! This is my first time writing long-form narrative and as such I am more than a little anxious to do well! Just like every author, I have my strengths and my weaknesses, and it is through my readers that I hope to improve on both! I have a loong story planned out for Noone, and there are going to be ups and downs, and themes from both Western Fantasy and Wuxia novels. If you are familiar with one, but not the other, no worries! This is written for everyone! I promise at least 1 chapter a day, and I will release more as I get more readers! Especially when I move up the charts! So if you are enjoying A Hand-Woven universe, get me into the top 50 and i will for sure release 2 a day! Top 10 and I will release 3 a day for the following week! If I get into top 3... Idk what I am going to do t.t probably die of excitement. But until then! We have a long way to go and every bit helps! :) Thank you!

Writing Quality is good, great use of words, smooth sentences, wide range of vocabulary. Though there are some wrongly placed commas or missing punctuations, it's still acceptable. Stability Updates is also good, no complaints there. Story Development is good, so many events already happened in the First Chapters, has good concept. Character Design is also good, you think of some unique features and personality... Though some are overused. World Background is great, no complaints there.

I saw the 4.8 rating and thought it was just another crappy novel with a inflated high rating, that will drop 1-2 points in a few days, but astoundingly it is actually fucking good and more than deserving of the rating. I am giving this a 5.0 since it is unique, well writen, very wholesome and with a good pacing.

Fantastic fantastic fantastic, uniqe, in the people's culture, where they live, their abilities, and history. The writing is good and the main character is interesting. Could become an anime or manga. So good I predict a bright future for the author, should they choose to never give up in a f-ed up world.

Overall one of the better novels on here. As of chapter 41 the quality far surpasses translated novels and a lot of the originals. Some key points - No reliance on tropes - Good character development (Side characters included) - The writing is quality and actually gives proper discription and setting. No info dumps and journals of what the mc did today. In general it’s just missing all the bad things that plague novels on here. Definitely give this one a read.

To be honest, this is an outstanding original novel. The writing quality is definitely up to standard; there are very few mistakes that I can see. It's a little bit early to properly judge the stability of updates. The story pacing is exceptional. It progresses steadily without dwelling over much on fluff or info dumps, while also leaving enough time for proper world building. The characters are good but not exceptional. Their personalities and goals are straightforward and easy to understand, but are a bit lacking in depth. At times they can seem somewhat one-dimensional i.e. (calm and levelheaded characters have water attribute, while excitable and happy characters have fire attribute -_-). how... imaginative. But the world background. OH the World Background! If I could give this a 10/5 I would. The setting is quite literally the main draw of the story for me. The grandeur, wonder, and mystery of the world is the most brilliant hook this story could have. The Author manages to give just enough information that is relevant to the plot while retaining a sense of mystery that keeps the reader wanting more. This is difficult to do and is a testament to the Authors narrative style. I look forward to where the story goes next.

Story is well written to the point i can feel the mischievousness of the main character. While exposition and conversation are carefully mixed into a fine tuned balance. If anything the only things lacking from this is the lack of further exposure into the world behind the story, but i figure it will be resolved by time. can't really comment on punctuation or grammar as i'm not an avid fans of both. But I like a story as long as i can understand it. oh the only real complaint i have is i always imagine Noone as an assassin since the name sounds like a code name "No One" All in all a well worth read

Just read it. You won't regret it. This is the good stuff you have been waiting for. This story will bring you enlightenment, happiness and peace of mind. Just do it!

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I've only reached about Chapter 30 and this is what I have to say. I don't like it really boring. Most authors in the beginning of the book would have made the main character have some sort of societal issues. The character that this author has created would have been perfect for the situation but the author decided to let him have the super happy life in this super fake Human Society. A place of happiness in kinship between people no arguments no conflicts just Paradise. these people don't even act like humans. As a result it is super boring in the first few chapters. The author is also pretty bad at telling us the readers the time and there's also a lot of time skipping for no reason. also something I don't like is how there's not a lot of first-person of view in this book. It just makes me feel uncomfortable because usually I would get to immerse myself into the character shoes feel the experiences that the main character feels but there's none of that here. There's just a bunch of third-person view like a narrator telling me all their actions kind of annoying. So im leaving unless somebody gives me some spoilers I don't mind.

Wonderfully fun and exciting world! Although it's different from the usual fare on webnovel, it is a great story with an interesting setting and cast of charecters! It isn't too tropey but is written in a way that will feel familiar to most audience's. Although some people said it's "slow" I don't think that's true. I'm writing this at chapter 35 and so far a lot has happened. Unlike other novels here though it doesn't look like this is going to be an edgy blood fest or a harem novel which is why some people seem to not get it. The mc isn't a reincarnator and overall not too "special" but honestly just seems like a good solid charecter. Though it will be interesting to see how this changes after the current plot point. There's an impressive use of foreshadowing and narrative devices. The only thing I could say is the grammar (punctuation mainly) needs some work. However that's just me being a grammar nazi for if you ever go big and consider publishing. For this here it never took me out of the story. Can't wait for more!!

And his name is noone...... Really, no one. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Author San said to rate, who am I to question? So far where I'm at in the story there isn't any type of wuxia/xianxia influence and I probably wouldn't have picked it up if I knew that. BUT I definitely don't regret picking it up and it's amazing =). Keep up the good work author 😺

Wow ! This story is like a hidden gem :) good change of pace compared to other generic novels (VMORPG, Martial Arts, Sci -Fi etc). The author has really taken his time to develop the story well so far. Characters are fleshed out well, apart from the weird names ( who names a character noone?). Story development is kind of a little slow, though understandable since the author was trying to build up the world properly. Its not like your Generic MC against the world or Super op MC faceslapping everyone novel. Its more of a slower - mc trying to fit in novel and exploring himself as it goes ( at least so far). Great work so far. Looking forward to how it unfolds as it goes on.