Server Lost
“Hey uh… Sephir, is this normal?” Ritorureddo called out to the Seraphim in front of the Party of Four, pointing to the text chat with two big words ‘Server Lost’ spelled out over it.
Slowly coming to a Halt, Sephir yawned as his head turned side to side, looking around the Dungeon lobby they had been walking into. “Where’d everyone go?”
“Eh…? Were you on autopilot again? Stop sleeping in-game!” Muttered Kyōkotora, pinching the bridge of their nose, only to open their eyes wide filled with shock, he could feel his face.
Sephir raised a brow calmly, looking to Ritorureddo before opening his own interface, only for it to vanish immediately. “Tch, That’s not right...”
“Guys! I can’t log out!” Bakkuhako shrieked and threw his hands in the air, planting them on his head, frantically freaking out as much as a skeleton mage possibly could.
“Neither can I!” Ritorureddo bleated as she grasped at her forehead.
“The Hub just disappeared...What the heck is this…?” Glancing back to the door, a blinding blue light flashed through the Lobby, a strange subtle warmth surrounding all of them.
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The year is 2145, virtual reality had taken the next step in evolution six decades ago and developed a Full Dive system that allowed humanity to sync their consciousnesses with new virtual worlds. The most innovative and interactive game known as Sekai no Kyū (Sphere of the World), is a Japanese masterpiece localized across the entire World.
Jack Graham plays as a Seraphim, one of the highest ranking and rarest Angel race classes in the game. He’s also one of the few foreign English speakers who plays on the Native Japanese Server.
Jack Graham, known as Sephir in-game, is a leading member of the PKKer guild Solvent 52, and has renown as one of the top LvL 100 players of the game. He is paid by the developers to help beginner player characters and instigate the completion of challenging quests.
Hospitalized and emotionally stunted in real life, after a traumatic event that claimed his little sister’s life and nearly his own, Jack uses virtual reality as an escape from the Greater World. Now… He finds himself in a New World with three weaker people he hardly knows at his side.
『Note: Not a Harem』
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This novel is bland. I don't like any of the characters personalities present at all. The way people are reacting and communicating is disappointing as well. I was intrigued at the start of the novel since it's somewhat similar to Overlord. Once they reached the tavern that's when I started disliking the story. You could have done some world building, develop their personalities,or push us to in the direction that this is a real world and not some game. From what I seen is a novel that makes no sense. The emotions and the reactions of the MC feel forced and cringy. Once they started the dungeon the story just turned to hell due to the revive function and vampires. Sorry but If your just going to make the MC some powerhouse with slaves and have a revive function then story is not going to go far unless you want to make a average novel that's filled with readers that praise your novel for having an OP character with a harem. If you want to improve as an author you need to compare the emotions and world building of your work with great novels that are similar to the genre of yours.
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Loving what you did with this story so far, even brought Jack along. You're like Gene Roddenberry who used Dylan Hunt over and over again. So Cute. The characters are likable, unique, and varied in racial class. An Undead, A Moon Elf, a High Human and a Seraphim. What else could you possibly ask for!? Keep it up Author-sama! You have our support!
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Me*reads all chapters released* *looks over at the clock to see the time* clock: way too late to be up. Me: 〣( ºΔº )〣 also me*?@!#* In all seriousness this is a good story,
Well-written and enjoyable, this story promises an intriguing future for its characters. Recommended not let Jack have any sort of harem, and also to show more focus on the rest of the party, such as the lich. Please give Jack more male companions to balance out the party's gender ratio, and for his peace of mind.
This is an amazing original from this amazing author. He will be going places he is my favorite author. So far all the books I've read from this author are fuchkin pheonomanal. I hope to see more, I will hunt you if you drop any of these masterpieces. I would give money to support you I'm sure other others would too. Maybe think about setting something up.
I love this novel. A resemblance to overlord. Big fan. a very detailed story. i like the mc. Good continuaton Good continuaton. #FrenchFan