Unfathomable Patriarch

Overall a good novel, but the MC...probably pussy type which is okay???? So no HAREM which is fking good because that genre is pure cancer and the people that like it too most likely a fat dude, no life retard. That's all. Im giving it a 4 🌟 review. Probably change it in the near future IF THE MC IS NO LONGER A COWARD *HINT* *HINT* AUTHOR PLS GET RID OF MC COWARDNESS...thanks in advance.

Unfathomable patriarch this title is fvking clickbait At first I tried reading this because of the domineering title but tf with this mc? What part of him is unfathomable. So an average idiot is unfathomable?

Read it up to chapter 30 something because I didn't want to judge too quickly. I was wrong. The MC is a coward, awkward guy even if his cultivation is high, he mumbles, stutters and cannot even act normal. Dont get me started on his fighting skills. The dude is a pussy. End of, no character improvement. If otakus are presented like this in fiction I hope in reality they're not that worse in Asia. If they are, I feel sorry for their parents.

If anyone is confused by this novel and the one that has Senior instead of Patriarch in it, it's because I moved it from the fan-fic section as I placed there by mistake. I thought that was the place for original novels to go.

An idiotic story, idiot MC and no depth of character design its like an over simpathic japanese otaku got transmigrated in a chinese novel and then doing what **** they always do there is system tag but nothing of system in volume 2 in volume 1 MC just use system for acting cool no use of brain and a lot of moral bull****ing

Story a bit slow to start off, MC a bit of a bumbling idiot at the beginning but there is some progress later. Not a story for those that expect a lot of killing happening.

The story development is utterly slow. The character is too flawed and unrelatable. If you made him a bit smarter this could work out. Without his cheat I can see him dying from tripping on a branch. Yeah i know this comes with character development. But from what I see he lacks self preservation. Buying useless skills instead of something that could help him adapt to his situation and new found power. He doest even have a sense of urgency. When all he cares about is internet and hot springs thats clearly a bad sign. The only good part is your superb writing and fast update speed.

Read up to chapter 43. Horrible novel!! MC is a shut-in coward otaku. Supposedly well read in cultivation novels but is an idiot when and even more a coward when knowing that he transmigrated into a powerful body with a system. Can not relate or comprehend the MC’s character or personality. It’s just tooooooo retarded and annoying. Waste of time

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this the best case of never judge a book by it's cover but here it's title the book is about a coward and stupid mc in a generic cultivation verse with generic plot and characters and generic cultivation world like a starts from a weak place then becomes strong next arc new sects or kingdoms introduced becomes weak again etc I can acpect a cowardly but cunning or clever mc cause they can still make it to top for readers looking for relaxation or something to pass time this is not for as this novel will only leave u frustrated and with rage and utter loathing towards the mc so read if u like such things thou I not

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I really don't know what to say. If you don't like the author taking his time to develop the MC. If you don't like a slow paced(to me its plenty fast) then don't read this Novel. The author is taking his time to write the story in which this socially awkward otaku comes to a cultivation world. He is letting him learn so that he may eventually become the unfathomable patriarch. What i am saying is don't read if you don't like. Stop commenting on how bad it is. The only mistake the author made is that he is a newcomer if it was a seasoned author you all would be calling this the best novel...

Bro I will support you man, but you gotta do a better job with the MC. He’s is a f*****g beta man. Come on you could portray him better than that. Idk if you plan on fixing his mentality as the story goes on but right now your MC is making story suck. It’s my honest opinion man. Everything else is dandy, your MC is just not cutting it.

not good enough, it just wasted my time, the volume 3 was a mess instead of advancing the author nerfed the mc, worst of all I got baited and read the summoning part, it was the worst change of plot ever, what benefits did he get there? none instead his cultivation was reset, that was the worst thing I've ever read, pure waste of time, I'm speechless how I stay overnight for this for whole 2 days.