Naruto: The new journey

The beginning was somewhat enjoyable, but soon it turned into a disaster. I thought this would turn out to be a good read, but that wasn't the case. I thought Naruto (The MC of the story) would be the only special one with otherwordly parents that saved him from his life full of misery in Konoha. But, Nah, the author had to introduce another random overpowered woman to adopt Sasuke so that he can be a good rival for the MC. That was a terrible move taking the uniqueness away from the MC. Nobody wants to read a not-so-special MC. In the original story, Naruto was special because of Kyuubi inside him, and you made it worthless by removing it in this story. I didn't mind it that but giving the same privilege to Sasuke is just not to my liking. And the thing with Hinata was just too much for me. Do you expect me to believe that Hiashi would abandon her daughter just because she cared about Naruto? FFS, he's a dead guy in Hiashi's views. I don't like forced plot, and that's what you did. As a result, you completely ruined the story for me and many others. You can write whatever you want, but don't expect everyone to share the same opinions as yours. That's precisely what happened in this story.

I thought naruto is going to be special, but no author decided to make Sasuke special too. I don't care if you're going to change Sasuke personality, we naruto to be special becomes he has strong parents but you did the same to Sasuke, **** Sasuke.

I hope Konan, join the harem. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................

I don't like it, it is NOT NARUTO!. It is wayyyyy to AU! Too many silly things! For example, aliens kidnapped Naruto from their spaceship (lol)using naruto's DNA to create a 'sister' for him the only purpose of it is probably for the author to have incest. Also, Chakra is now apparently part of even higher energy called (origin energy) WTF?!! The author could have made everything more believable, even incest if he so wishes and cut down all that other nonsense. I mean aliens kidnapped him really? Wait? Maybe this is a parody. The author should have let us know in the synopsis.

The MC is not unique at all!!! And boring use of tragedy card on Hinata just so she can be with Naruto. Bah, and worse of all he's a modafuckin incest loving bastard. What more can you say... I quit...

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author, waiting for the background of the story that happened to Hinata, and you can also give her Orochimaru Sarutobi, barter xD, hopefully you can also make both "Uzumakis" enter into a relationship, they are not true brothers. ------------------------ It would be interesting to have Nanako and Hinata and maybe Konan, after they finish everything that this world has to offer, you will go to another dimension or anime world: - "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -·Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou ka· = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc

This is good story.... If you want something more than those repeating fanfic... Here is the thing that you are looking for .... . . . . I hope that story will become interesting as the story continued....

I really liked this story so different and satisfying seeing naruto not being "naruto" and the plot so different then the usual its been 1 year since an update on ur naruto story please please continue and finish writing. thank you

hope you are still continue this fanfic one of the good naruto fanfics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Great fanfic you have here!!!! Definitely vote for a lot of chaos andvdarkvside been bring out to the light... Please expose all the ugliness of the village and let them all on the plain view to sow chaos... After that, just watch them blaming each others, killing each others, destroying the village balance and everyone will have it pick side and kill each others...