How can you live in a society full of Gods, wanna be Gods, Potential Gods, Gods-in-the-making, Lunatics and ETC....
1. Be a God
2. Train to be a God
3. Hide yourself from Gods
4. Create chaos at God's Land
5. Spread Seeds and Create more God
Be ready for plotholes.
Constructive Criticism is Good but read atleast 10 before, give yourself a favor a great favor as I will not entertain anyone. I won't read review or comment that is just complaining, and whining.
It's free mates, Do at your own risk.
This story is a slow pace one about 2 chapter every week. I may upload extra one if I'm on mood.
Note: I don't own marvel and any movie character that appear in the story.
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I love this story the grammar is perfect the mc is perfect the worldbuilding is perfect don't stop this jewel.................................................................................................................................................
i dont recommend reading it. in start it was a good story but after chapter 30 or something author decided it no longer needs to be a good story nd started mixing up one world to another some even fanfics world and made story so confusing that it is no longer understandable.
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The grammar is a little iffy but the story was pretty good so it was over looked. That is until he decided to reboot the story 30 chapters in and nerf Loki. If you do not like slave to the system novels, do not read, because that’s what happens around chapter 35. I originally liked this a lot, it was a fun Loki novel with a good back story and world, but it was ruined for me. This is just my personal opinion so take it with a grain of salt but I had to drop and don’t plan on coming back.
Starts out good besides nonstop errors and typos Then deevolved into mc thinking less with his head and more with his dic He lusts after the thought of his step sister He invites a "stalker" into his room and within 5 mins spills the fact he's part frost giant he also lets her sleep in his bed and he pretty much tells her she can use him for his power long as she focuses on him only He right afterwards plans to hook up with sit and starts to play along with her Author turned Loki into less of a emotionally hurt but misunderstood man into a mc that thinks less with his brain and more with his dong and he obeys Odin unless he can't get permission from his mother so he's pretty much a mc who has low iq is a mother suck up baby thinks with his cuck and is a general hoe...... Good job author another ruined novel to add to web novel If I could rate lower than 1 I would nobody wants to read about a personal wish fulfillment sect harem trope bs novel unless you are one of those who think the only good novel is to waifu every female then expect to be the emperor of China and have a dam palace of naked chicks to act like the meat thought of your d is a aphrodisiac..... If so please to help lesson the Earth's idiot population Go get a appointment with a therapist You must have a issue with yourself if that's the only way you can feel fulfilled
Some obvious issues with grammar that makes following the story very hard. Whilst the idea behind the book is very good, it feels like things occur suddenly and without reason . All this makes it very hard to be invested and lost in the book. Overall a good effort but lacking in many aspects.
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Really like the character and comedy in this novel.Don't drop.❗❕❗❕❗❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❕❗❗❕❗❗❗❗❗❗❗❗❗❗❗❗❕❗❕❗❕❕❗❕❕❕❗❗❗❗❗❕
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MC idiot. TRASH .......................................................................................................................... . .......
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