???: "Are you sure about this, elder brother?"
A purple humanoid figure with horns resembling an adult ram's asked.
???: "Yes I am, little brother. It has been eons, but you know that I don't like leaving any mistakes that I have done behind."
Replies a shining yellow figure with majestic stag horns on his head.
???: "But seriously. Elder brother, are you sure that she would change because of a child? The woman's heartless."
The purple figure commented, a bit disapproving of his brother's decision.
???: "We've seen the creation and destruction of planets, of living creatures, of beings like us. And throughout all that, there is always change. And I hope this would change her."
The glowing figure, then, raised his hand, and on his palm, an orb appeared. The orb was black and white, the colors seemingly playing with each other as they danced about.
???: "Now let your creation bring it to her."
The glowing figure ordered to his brother, who only huffed and casually grabbed the orb.
???: "If it's like this, then I better give my blessing as...ugh...sorry, that's gross, to that witch. Since she loves calling herself the Goddess of my creation, then this will be their princess."
The purple figure, then, formed a portal behind him, putting the orb in it and closing the portal.
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I don't even know who the character's name. So, is this even a good story? Plus I feel like the grimms' princess was a name for another chapter book/novel.[img=faceslap]
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It's a very good novel, but I think Selum got lost, right? And well... I mean, you're saying that he's simply seducing everyone and that's it? Well, I'm not into that, but if it becomes repetitive, it will definitely be dropped by many readers.
I think the story is pretty good and an interesting direction to go with it. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Yes oh god yes ...................................................................................................................................
Great so far and looking forward to what comes next. Just hope it author doesn't drop it. I's been ages since I've seen RWBY, so this is a pretty fresh experience for me.
I've been wondering why your books in wattpad stopped updating but here you are in webnovel. Well anyways like what I did in wattpad I'll support you here aswell
I haven't read a fan fiction from this PoV yet, I'm excited to see where it will go. _______________________________________________________
I'm not familiar with the original story at all but the beginning is very interesting. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yuri is life. .....................................................................................................................................................................................
first yuri of this novel xD, just for being yuri I already wait for the progress.. ...........................................................