Center Realm: The Girl and Her Glowing Necklace
"You were thrown in a world unknown with creatures so far from reality."
Rose Ann Bardot is a girl who’s been living under the roof together with terrible people after tragically losing her beloved mother. Her grandmother and her aunties have mistreated and starved her for as long as she can remember. Every day she hopes that she’ll be set free from the grasp of her evil relatives.
The only thing that sparks hope in her heart is a beautiful necklace that her mother entrusted to her. Knowing that whenever she wears it, she feels the comfort of her mother. Little does she know that one day, the necklace would be the cause of her salvation and her discovery of a new world.
Join Rose as she embarks on a journey to a place she would never imagine exists. And along the way she uncovers secrets and mysteries she’d never expected.
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Inspired by Alice in Wonderland & The Nutcracker and The Four Realms.
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Hello there! If you plan to read my book after that synopsis then buckle your seatbelts, it'll be a long ride. If you're not convinced, then beware, I'll hunt you down. Kidding! I won't force anyone but do give it some thought. I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
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Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the supernatural(elfs, magical necklaces), the fantasy realm sort of thing It's a nice plot, the going to a different realm synopsis made me think of Alice in wonderland (it so happens it was partly inspired), but you've taken that and brought it into a beautiful story line. The unique names is something I admire. The first chapter "In the vast woods" was filled with thrilling sights, why was Rosettatu running? What was she doing in the woods? Why was she scared of being found out? How did that elf know her name? I hope all these are addressed in the next chapter! I personally love Fantasy novels! I have added this to my reading list! ❤️❤️❤️❤️💓 All being said, keep up the good work.
I've read a couple of chapters and this story is pretty interesting. I liked the vivid descriptions of the surroundings and what the character was experiencing. This story feels like Cinderella except instead of locking her in her room, Cinderella's step family was forcing her to go to the ball and marry an abusive prince. This also feels like The Wizard of Oz except Dorthy never wants to go home to Kansas. I was a little confused at first because the first chapter was talking about a woman named Rosetta while the second chapter was talking about someone named Rose Ann. I initially thought that they were the same person since Rose can be a nickname for Rosetta but then I found out, in the second chapter, that Rosetta is the MC's mom. I like the order of how the chapters shift from past to present time. Odd numbered chapters take place in the past while even numbered chapters take place in the present.
A wonderful story to read, the content is very meaningful. I like how the author delivered the story in such a good day. Please continue producing great novels.
Perfect grammar√ Show not tell√ Intriguing√ Every wording is emphasized with meaning and atmosphere, it's good for someone who likes to immerse themselves with the story. I'm not a professional writer myself so I can't point anything bad within this story but hey, It's something good for your time, a hidden gem hiding from a thousands and thousands of other similar gem with unique and it's own aesthetic. Kudos for the author for making such a wonderful story It's really recommend, I've only read a couple of chapter but I will finish it in the future
Very nice story
Wow. This book is so descriptive and on point. But wow. How can someone be so creative! How can someone write like legends! This story will definitely be one of the best books in the world. Mind blown!
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I was only planning to read a couple of chapters but ended up reading a lot more! The story is very interesting, especially if you like fairy tales with a twist. Like Alice going down a rabbit hole, you'll find a whole new world to this! Definitely going into my recommended list! Keep it up!
What a fantastic multi-faceted, fun read! Rose is growing in strength & understanding of this strange world she has accidently discovered. The elves & talking rocks, the knights & beautiful faries counter-balance the evil that lurks in the shadows. Every chapter worthy of your time!
An irresistible wonderful plot! Filled with suspense and intrigue at every turn . Set in a complex magical world, I especially loved the awesome characters and the pace is thrilling. Can't wait to read more and more and get to see secrets revealed. Keep them coming! Its a lovely piece of writing.
Writing is on point! Gosh, it's very well written. Especially, at the beginning where the MC is running away in the woods. It's so well depicted. One of the best novels I've ever read with how good the writing is. I also added this book to my library for my inspiration for writing :3 No words left, 5 stars!
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The writing is confusing and not a lot of background on characters. i stopped after the 3rd chapter because it was so confusing that I got bored.the main character seems to be not very intelligent and barely has any original thoughts. as a reader i dont care about her so if she died i would be ok with it. i gIve this story 1 star. and thats being generous .
At the beginning of the chapters, I could sense that this story is top-notch. There's a bit of a drama where it brought my emotion into a turmoil, making me wanting to read it again. I really love knights and magic genre, so I am looking forward for the progression (if the story is yet to be finished) of the plot.
Wow! Fantasy! I love to read this kind of drama and fantasy together with a twist for adventures. When I read this it kinda excites me to read more of this story. Thank you for updated the story author! Hope to learn more about your story. Keep it up the good work author!