Jiana Achilla Chavez is the daughter of a big-time business tycoon. Her name rings ostentatiously around her high school campus and maybe even beyond its four walls. But despite having that title, she finds it hard to communicate and trust people.
So when she took step on her new school grounds, her life took a lot of different (and unforeseen) series of turns- especially that it involves a certain guy who's a year ahead of her; a guy who happened to have unexpected connections with very unexpected girls.
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The writing quality is very good. She describes in a creative way that amazes me. She knows how to deal with words and uses them correctly. The update stability is good. The story development is good. You can see how amazing the story is gonna be. Character design is good✨ World backgroun is also good✨ Overall this story for me is perfect❤️ I also want to say that I’m happy and proud of the author. Keep it up and may your story bloom more🎉
I saw this novel on the TGIF posts and there was a huge amount of chapters being released, so as a fellow author I thought why not see if there's any good novels? I don't typically read female lead webnovels (I read a lot of them surprisingly on hard cover) but this one isn't too bad. And there is specific reasoning why if you want to dive into it. 1 - It needs some serious grammar checks and some basic help with dialogue formatting but, it's not too abrasive for a natural english speaking reader. Though seriously... might be good to get an editor or proofread your work at the very least aha. 2 - One thing I really liked about the first few chapters I've read is that the author has great descriptive imagery and goes into depth on scenes. It honestly is so fundamental for good authors to make readers feel like they're inside their book. Literally. And this book does a great job of that. 3 - Has incredibly stable updates. The only turn-offs for me are the same ones I have with so many novels on this site including #1 in power rankings, My Vampire System, are the lack of attention and proofreading over the work. The other turn-off is that it's really cliche, it's not bad for some I totally understand that and even I don't mind cliche genres and settings or plots at times. However, sadly this cliche is not my cup of tea. However, shoutout to the author! I think you did pretty well for this considering I think this is a new project for you :)
Title’s not really eye catching but when you read the actual story, it’s amazing! ive read the synopsis too and tbh, Author’s writing style is really cool and it was what made me read the Chapters🔥✨🥰💯💕💕🙃🤣☺️😭😅🥰🖤✨✨🔥💕🥰💕💯🥰
All i can say is wow!! I couldnt think of anything more and why do we even Need 140 characters? Im gonna fill it with emojis instead. ✨🔥🥰💯💕🤧🤣😭🔥
I already like Jiana Chavez!!! She kind of reminds me of a friend of mine so I was really hooked with the story immediately! Also, The flow of the story is really smooth and I could already tell that this would be a great novel.
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A very interesting stooooryyyy!!! A pittle common and all but reality fiction is a good genre because it portrays reality and the author lets us open our eyes to the world! Tbh, I already liked the beginning! Especially when I mistook the male lead to the one Jiana bumped into in the first chapter! ✨🔥🤣
I love how the story flows. Though it’s kinda cliche, the author portrays the reality of events very well. She had this certain perspective where she’ll make you think that what happens here happens in real life. Her writing style is very detailed and I love how she clears out every of the character’s actions and emotions, making you feel like you have been creating a movie in your head! Also, she updates very often so I get to read almost everyday!!! 🥰💯
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