A scientist was betrayed by his own comrades and got reincarnated, but this story focused on the game, or perhaps the world he found recently for his funding to take revenge.
The world where a new game took place. The scientist named Abelard, called Abel. Somehow got into the body of the young boy from an aristocrat family, an NPC.
Soon, both of them went on an adventure to separates both of themselves in the game without the NPC, Abelard, even knowing about the Abel's secret
But a secret can't stay hidden forever after all.
I can't say much here, but if you read the sypnosis, you should know about the story, it might not be as exciting as you thought of it and I apologize for that, I truly lack of experience Anyway, enjoy my novel!
I love how the story flows, not too fast and not too slow.. the first chapter is also cool.. it's like I am reading a manga book in words. the imaginative world is also cool.. keep it up
So, how do I start? This novel is written quite nicely, even though there are a few improvements that can be done. Nevertheless, this writer has never ceased to put more and more effort in his novels. Can’t wait to see what happens next for this one.
I read first chapter just to look how it is, but suddenly I got hooked in and was kept reading and reading. This has great potential and will do good if given some exposure. Keep it up!
This, in my opinion, could grow into something amazing if given the chance and support. Just stick with it while the author polishes their skills and you might just find a gem.
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The story is well written and the plot of the story is also just great. Author have out much effort in it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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