The Rise Of A Child

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Great story bro... just wish he didn't lose his memories. Ight I even voted with my POWAH STONES*Evil thunder noise in background* well thanks and tc hoomans!

it sucks, it took the memory of the reincarnated mc, a very bad idea, there is no reason to take the memory, if I didn’t want him to know the plot, it was just to make him a dog in his own world, useless reincarnation.

Bad idea to take memories off. like if you want him not to remember anything why reincarnate? just make him of the danmachi world. Like, god saw the kid in coffin and he revives him with powers. That's all. why bother all this? i was just waiting for him to get his memories back and play well. But, MC is scared to go to dungeon. Like What?

Underatted FanFic. Please Continue. A Good Read. Interesting backstory of MC. Grammar and spelling 👌. Please Continue......................

I haven't read this and I probably won't because there isn't any information in the synapse about what this story is about. You need a little bit of info to get readers attention.

i read this novel thinking tensura but got me baited, and the way mc loses his memory bruh no i can't. alert, its danmachi fanfic

Grammar:Good Background:👌 Character Development:Need more chapters but pretty good so far Some people are batching about MC loosing his memory saying just make him an oc in danmachi will be better(I do t agree) and being scare of going in dungeon(imagine going to another world where you don't have memory of and there are a place with monster that have a high chance of kill you would you go in?of course not you need to be really desperate or decentat fighting)but don't mind them and keep up the good work

wh it's good but I dropped it cuz the mc is kinda naive way too naive he showed his status the the logic familiar Sebastians n Susan's status's to aid just like that ye he likes her but still

I had high hopes about this fanfic but in the end it's onr of many and very forgettable, the only good thing about this is the writing of the author. A personal opinión: don't make the characters to Op at the beggining of the story it make it boring

Uh huh. Underrated Danmachi FanFic. A bit of a downer about MC's memories but overall it's all ok. By the way, does MC look like Rimuru? Thanks

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Seemed kinda interesting until it turned out that the MC also *acts* like a child.