The story begins with a girl with rose lips, pale skin as beautiful as snow, but as cold as it gets, with lips that bewitches you filled with innocence and maturity. I was just your average highschooler who had a chance encounter with a girl I was totally entranced with, but all of a sudden......
Written by: Tread-zan
Cover Illustrated by: instagram:dearlyx_
Draft illustration by: matsurii
Edited by: Wattpad:ttheophania
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Please note:This book was written with anime in mind and contains quite a few dialogs. I'll try to lessen them as the chapters progress:)
Just a few lines and I added it. Can't believe you are a new writer. I hope this bok best of luck in advance. Though the story is too good it does not need anymore blessing. More power to you author.
It's a good novel. Good for starters. The main character is very very relatable. It was like my experiences during my highschool days. Nostalgic i must say haha. Overall, a wonderful book. Keep it up Mr. Author.
Still new to to all this. This is my first novel so please be kind:). This was supposed to be a manga so it contains quite a bit of dialogue but I'll try to lessen the dialogues as the story progresses to make it more of a novel:). **. I might suck at this cause I don't really read much novels(or books in general).
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I really like your book cover! It really looks like a manga! For me, the story seems nice, and the setting looks incredible! l love it! It would be awesome to see some sketches that you could make for the story~ That would be cool~
Well, kudos to the author and writing. More power to you author. Best of luck in advance. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really love the story that you created. Even though you are a starter, you manage to impress your readers. Keep up the good work and stay safe.
I see that you're good at describing things, the chemistry of arby and glenn is something I like about having friends. Lessening the dialogue and putting it on the same level as doing narration would make the story even better. At least in my opinion. The story have less than 10 chapters, no way that's enough to determine how great your story will be in the future. But i will put 5 stars just because i like reading the dialogues, especially reading the conversation arby and glenn had in the first chapter!
The intro to the book gave clear understanding to what is yet to come without spoiling the series. Loving it so far! The characters are very interesting especially that Ramil Yatsu guy, more great chapters to come hopefully!!! ❤️❤️❤️
A feel of the nostalgic novel that might awaken the minds of every reader on what will happen to the story! I must say the title itself speaks alone and the readers will like where it was headed for some time! Good job!