God Aim
Author: Notnli
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An 18 year old encounters a Master player in the First Person Shooter 'All Fight' .
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Take my words as a passing wind for I have only skimmed through your work. Separate your paragraphs such that they contain 2 to 4 sentences depending on length, otherwise it would be too taxing to read. Apologies for not reading the entire story. Write well and don't hesitate to ask for help from other authors in the official discord server of inkstone. You can be a better writer.
It was okay, I was pretty sure that maybe you could change the books thumbnail and it might make it more interesting to read...[img=exp][img=exp]