Obito cant use his sharigan or rinngan Mc has a mental problem or something because he's Dumb, Also mc joins marins and is a lapdog.-------.
3 years ago
16
AwokenShawn
I like it so far can’t wait to see what you do with it
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3 years ago
12
Trollface
well, your Obito is a real weakling (also cardboard as a person) for 8 years he could not try a mangek, Ace almost killed him. and rinnegan will get it in 100 years!?. the authors always fall into 2 extremes - firstly, excessive OP, and secondly, excessive weakening of the mac. you have the second case. adios amigo.
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i like it so far it's really amazing, and it's good in all aspects! deserve 5 stars!
but when will the mc will be able to use his mangekyou sharingar and rinnegan??alot of years passed already hmm??
3 years ago
1
victor_dupretz
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
3 years ago
1
IlIlIlIlIl
it's a pretty nice story and I'm hoping for more chapters...................................................................................
3 years ago
1
Comrak
👍👍👍👍👍 awesome, need more. keep up the good work.
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Obito cant use his sharigan or rinngan Mc has a mental problem or something because he's Dumb, Also mc joins marins and is a lapdog.-------.
I like it so far can’t wait to see what you do with it Gffbffbvffvxdgvcdfvcfffy dc fdgdfngf the F he cd yo do get fdg C gf
well, your Obito is a real weakling (also cardboard as a person) for 8 years he could not try a mangek, Ace almost killed him. and rinnegan will get it in 100 years!?. the authors always fall into 2 extremes - firstly, excessive OP, and secondly, excessive weakening of the mac. you have the second case. adios amigo.
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i like it so far it's really amazing, and it's good in all aspects! deserve 5 stars! but when will the mc will be able to use his mangekyou sharingar and rinnegan??alot of years passed already hmm??
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
it's a pretty nice story and I'm hoping for more chapters...................................................................................
👍👍👍👍👍 awesome, need more. keep up the good work. .....................................................................................................
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I hope you guys enjoy and remember to please write a review your comments are well appreciated whether they are food or bad. Stay tuned for another chapter tomorrow.