A Prophecy Foretold

Excellent Writing Quality the author explains scenes emotions and uses a variety of words to accompany it no complaints so far. Update Stability is all over the place and seems to be done on a whim. Story Development is unique but relatively cliché but still follows a seemingly fixed plot. Character Design is pretty well done as different emotions and meanings can be seen through each actions. World Background is although cliché has a nice feel to it and honestly I can't explain it in words but it is excellent 4/5 Overall Review: Writing Quality is Excellent. Update Stability is nearly nonexistent. Story Development is unique but cliché this can be said with the World Background as well but that can be forgiven as the world background is done excellently. Character Design seems well thought out and somewhat makes you able to relate or at least understand what they are going through, the story seems to lack a flare or something that makes it stand out. I would say you have potential but I honestly can't tell I'm just an idiot on the internet feel free to take my words as whatever you think they are.

The thought of having to read his name Everytime discouraged me. It seems it will interesting though maybe if the name was different I would have read it. How do you even pronounce that?