The Mask Of The Monster

Fantasy150 Chapters332.3K Views
Author: Proteety_Promi
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Warning: Mature Content

Trigger Warning: Trauma, abuse (Not by the male lead)



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I pulled my face down again, taking her in for another kiss. This time the kiss was not too gentle, but it was not fast and rough either. But it was something, something sensual. Her hand again found the back of my neck and this time, she was pulling me down. In the warm air and the dim light radiating from the fireplace, our kiss went on, silencing my thoughts while I lost myself in the bubble of time as pleasure and desire filled my body and mind.

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Having a toxic family, all Ella wanted was to find a place where she could be happy. One day, she discovered an entrance to a whole other realm where there was no place for mercy. It was teeming with monsters and beasts yearning for power.



Finding a human girl in the world of monsters and beasts, the most terrifying of all, known as the Beast, found a strange attraction towards her. Was it for her flesh or for the girl?

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Proteety_Promi
Proteety_Promi

Hey, readers! Author here! This novel is about a monster and a human girl. The girl believed since the beginning that there is a heart inside that terrifying shell of the monster when the monster did not know it himself. Known as the beast, the most frightening of all the monsters, found himself getting attached to the girl. So what's next?

3 years ago
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Lover_Bird
Lover_Bird

I love the way things started. I'm really excited to know about the monster. I mean, really, I really want to see how things go between them.

3 years ago
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Blackpaint
Blackpaint

Definitely my cup of tea👌 Writing quality is good, I rarely read first person POV stories that aren't messy so plus points for that. The characters are neatly made, the FL is very relatable and I could feel the emotions in her thoughts and actions. I also like the writing style of the author, very straightforward. I've read some comments here that some parts are more of a tell than show but I think it's the author's personal style. Overall, it's a recommended book!

3 years ago
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Leigh_Green
Leigh_Green

Overall. A new interesting uptake of a human and the beast. Ella and Leandro. Writing Quality. Good writing. Very minimal editing. Updating Stability. It was continuously updated until very lately. Story Development. Gradual pace. From a normal world to a not-so normal place. Ella's normal curiousity peek coursed her into entering a whole new realm not exactly of humans but of monsters. Character Design. A typical cliché teenage girl who finds herself squeezed within her family whose stepsister appears to be doted more by her mom. And a paranoid Beast who is wary of his own family. What an interesting pair they make. World Background. Normal human setting co-existing with the unseen world of monsters. I'd be interested to enter that hole as well so long as no Orgades are there to welcome me.

3 years ago
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Darine_ALRAMMAH
Darine_ALRAMMAH

This gives me beauty and the beast vibes, BUTT the plot is promising. I feel that there is more to our characters than meets the eyes. The way you set put scenes in the reader's mind is just 10/10. The style is captivating as well. This is promising. I have plenty of theories on this. I hope you surprise me and exceed them all! You're a great author keep writing! Added to library XD

3 years ago
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Tomorrowceases
Tomorrowceases

The text as a whole flows very well. There's not much to read for now, but so far, there was no instances of rereading things because I wasn't concentrated or anything. Meaning, writing quality is good. The style is great and so is the story, too. That's quite intriguing and it's what kept me reading after chapter 2. There's not much world background for now, but there's only three chapters, and given how wonderful author is doing so far, i wouldn't worry about that at all. Keep it up, author.

3 years ago
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Kelly_Goodwin
Kelly_Goodwin

I just so happen to stumble over this book and as luck would have it this book is so good. I think the characters are so believable . i can just image another dimension and believe that it could be real. i ❤ it so dont miss it come and read it...

3 years ago
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Leanne_Johnston_9265
Leanne_Johnston_9265

I love this story. I could not put it down. I can't wait for more. I love storys like this. grate writing and details. I hope they open up more with each other.

3 years ago
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Ice_Princesss
Ice_Princesss

I really feel sorry for Ella. The way she is being treated is actually common in most households and I love that she stands up for herself and doesn't allow herself to be trampled by others. I have a feeling that Zoe's family is not so perfect, that they are hiding something. I don't know, maybe it's all in my head 🤭 Either way, I love your writing style and this is a great story .I'm definitely gonna stay tuned [img=recommend]

3 years ago
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Blooming_Safflower
Blooming_Safflower

Wow, I felt the struggle of the FL lead. The background story is well written. Character description and emotion display are also perfect. Would love to see how it ends.

3 years ago
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Kara_wish_writes
Kara_wish_writes

I especially like the female lead Ella. she is smart and in control of her emotions. she is also quite daring to go to an abandoned house which is said to be Haunted. I also like that she doesn't care about people who don't care about her

3 years ago
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Jonkohrr
Jonkohrr

This is a fantasy romance that doesn't rush things. The flow of the story is great and the characters presented so far have their distinctive personalities. I would definitely continue reading to see where it goes. My recommendation to the author is to do some proof reading from time to time. Good work and good luck!

3 years ago
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MayDreamer
MayDreamer

I loved this story its really interesting and makes you feel like reading more. The description and flow of the story are perfect, I really enjoyed reading it and yep I added it to my collection. Unlikely I don't have power votes with me right now or else I would have really voted for you! But Anways keep writing!

3 years ago
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Yanie_Long
Yanie_Long

The plot quickly becomes unexpected from the start. I enjoy the unique quality of using a monster in this story. The storyline is very interesting making me want to know what's going to happen next.

3 years ago
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Yi_Xi
Yi_Xi

I like how the author changes their perspective! The premise was handled very well too. There are some cases where some sentences does not fit well with the paragraph but nonetheless, everything works fine. Good work, Author-sama!

3 years ago
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