Enjoying life in twilight
Author: DarknessAuthor
3.8
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Appearing in a pitch black space after death Sam talks to god spins three wheels and enjoys his second life
I do not own twilight
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To be honest, the story was a total disappointment. It started off ok, nothing really special, but it was ok, the bad thing is the most pathetic and forced romance I've ever seen, and over all crepuscle cliche, the MC just comes into the world, tries his powers and bonds with the blonde girl, by force and the MC didn't even care, the bond comes and the MC says he wants to get away, he wants freedom, so he was doing his own thing for a year, then comes the problems that the blonde's family has problems and the MC feels that, blah blah, in the end the MC saves her and falls totally in love with her because of the bond, which ironically makes him a slave to love and the bond, really disappointing, mostly because it seems that no one who does crepusculo fanfic tries to do something new or different, it's all bonding, bonding, and more bonding.
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Is like reading a third rate Chinese cliché novel,full of errors and bad grammar!! first time i saw a author use "u" and not "you"! . .
Honestly dude…you kinda blew it with this story. Some chapters were alright, but others have just been completely cringe. And when your MC just decided to turn into a xiancia murder hobo this story was honestly over at that point…there’s not really any way to redeem it.
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I think the author wanted to give the story some spice a plot twist to entertain the readers and failed miserably He is hostile against the cullens for petty reasons like them favoring edward another (it's nunya business why do you care?) The forced romance and bonding, bonding. And even more bonding This is a hot piece of garbage that you can read if you are bored to death
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LAZY WRITING... Just type 'YOU' instead of 'U' Why are u using u, u dirty mongrel! Just use Grammarly... Or anything really, just make an attempt...
Trying to balance the spam reviews. This is not a good story anyway,........ nope cringe. so much cringe. .
Why can't they be creative? Just the same plot of bind and everything. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I'm here just reading 1 -3 stars people's review and i'm having Fun Af... so i gave 5 stars for those ppeople making me wheeze like a madman. Lol
Cringe ASF……………………………
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