Savitar, God of Speed

There is only one big problem being the fastest man alive. ....................................................................................

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So far I really like the story but I think when Izuku goes to other Universes or girls from other storys get introduced they should only be added to MC´s Harem and not Bakugo or some other male, its fine if they get other girls but make them OC or sth.

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First review Not bad. The grammar can be worked on more, and some parts of the story are a bit exaggerated, but the premise is good and I will continue reading it, as I like what you've done until now.

Few things i hate here Why still the need to have the one for all if you have speed force Second why have toru in the harem it is already confirmed that in the manga the toru is the traitor in ua

Concept was good but the story is below average. Characters, Writing and story development falls flat. I might have liked it if I was 12 though...

for some people this story probably won't fit for them, as it focuses a lot on everyone's development besides the mc (the mc is still the main one) and it was done wonderfully well. I usually don't like novels like this, but this one enchanted me. It was written in a very good way, few typos. the development still needs some editing at some points (like maybe adding a more plausible reason for the harem, as it looks pretty flat). I finally found a good story in the midst of so much rubbish, to almost give up reading it because of the low rating author, I ask you to delete these unnecessary comments from people who didn't like 1 point of the story and decided to give it 1 star. (an example would be a guy who complained about toru being in the harem because she's a traitor and such, when it's already been proven that is not her in the manga)

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

well I came to find gold but I did find it here 🤣🙂✌️😂 . Harèm is massive . MC's op . A.I is there . hidden villian . huge anticipation . chad izuku

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I've read it and very good about everything so far. Story is interesting, as you read further you'll see names and characters whose supposed to be on other franchises but that's what it makes interesting. Writing is excellent and so few mistakes to see. All in all just very good reads. P.S. I just hope Midnight isn't part of harem cause I've read so much about her in other fanfics. I also hope Mei is part of it cause she got good chemistry with deku but you do you. Just here to give review. Love the story

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Пусть и история исполнения желаний но какие-то очень уж абсурдные у тебя желания чувак.............................................................................................................................................