Starting from Young Justice

It's excellent. I just hope this is not a harem

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Story was Ok and interesting at the start, sadly Author decided to throw MC into living with Batman for no reason. He was happy living with Selina Kyle and then bamm now he's living with Batman it's so ugh that it ruined story for me imo.

For now, only problem i found is grammar, two or three error there and there,, but stability of updated SUPER.. Your story got my interest i must say... Well, i hope you won't drop it, Good day,

it is good

So he asks to be part Anodite, part viltrumite, and is a meta human with adaption powers, also gets opi-opi no mi. He gets found by catwomen then when he gets his power she dumps him as Batman’s then he gets stronger and then cut superman in half with opi-opi no mi and then is “forced” to show his powers to bats and sups. He also has an ai that is level 10 (in Ben 10) but can’t hack Batman’s stuff??? Then you say she can’t (oh yeah it’s a femal witch bearly listen to you and it’s only purpose is to hold knowledge witch my can’t even access. I wanted to stop when he was left witch Batman when he got powers but read on to see if it get better(it doesn’t).

Need faster updates man 😔. .

KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP.

Just don’t have romance But your also writing a fic that has soul magic DC has soul magic you could easy have one woman who would never betray u with that if I was thrown in DC I would do that