Avatar: The gamer

5 stars cause I didn't see the "harem" tag, and I'm in a good mood.

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it's an alright story not a fan of the summoning

Am the author so my review will certainly be biased but I really think this book deserves a 5 stars review, my opinion at least, I put a lot of time and effort into it and made sure to smooth Any rough edges, plus I learned from my previous 2 books and applied my experience here. So I hope you enjoy it.

Classic example of an author that can't control their powercreep urges. MC starts with a gamer system which has features added to the point where he is summoning characters strong enough to match an avatar, on top of his own growth. Unfortunately, the author doesn't write a real impactful scenario where the MC is actually able to use that power, so the world just seems stupid and unbalanced. MC is incredibly unintelligent from a planning perspective which adds to the flaws. Main feedback point is - if you're going to give your MC massive power and then have them never use it to create a positive change during important moments (e.g. village attack), it's deeply unsatisfying.

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Great story… but takes too long for updates otherwise the rating would be higher

it's good story I can't wait for more chapters.

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Good story with a good mc and solid world building, the only issues I have is that they writing can (only sometimes) be a bit iffy, and that the powerset of our MC is hard to understand. I personally didn’t like it very much when he got a summon feature to call forth other characters as his “followers” but luckily it hasn’t played too big of a role.

English is not my native language. I will write what shortcomings I noticed in this fanfic. The first shortcoming is the multiple strengthening in battle. If anyone does not know, this nonsense was invented by the Chinese. No one becomes stronger in battle. All that people get from battle is experience and more effective use of their skills. The second shortcoming is the unrealistic description of the main character's thoughts. In dangerous situations, people hardly think, they just do. The solution literally appears in our heads by itself, without a path of how the solution came to us. The third shortcoming is the illogicality of the system. Blood is much more difficult to control than ice. Therefore, he should have mastered ice much earlier than the battle with the bear. Mages who control tons of water can take control of blood only during the full moon. But the main character can control blood, but cannot turn water into ice and control large amounts of water. Plus, the main character is strangely weakened. Katara was so weak at the beginning because she did not have a teacher. As soon as he appeared, her development went rapidly. The main character actually has a teacher. The system itself gives him the right moves, but he is slightly stronger than Katara (at the beginning of the series).

It's pretty good. The only note I have is it seems a bit too early for him to learn blood bending. he can barely even waterbend, yet he leaps directly to blood bending? he should have at least gotten to a certain mastery in water bending before blood bending. Asides that, I would like you to check out "Avatar the last airbender: shattered earth". I would love yo get your opinion

add tragedy tag so that people like me who don't like death of loved ones don't waste their time reading what they dont't like i also have something to complein about why didn't the mc use his stat points...well i guess even if he had used his stat points was stronger and even had ten more summons if you wanted to kill his mother she would have died anyway. what bothers me about these kind of stories is that the mc even with all their powers they can't even change the sh!t that they want to change.