Secrets Of Loretto Legacy
In the imperial year 1820,
Luiza’s world collapsed when her mother left her on the night of her thirteenth birthday, never to be seen again. She was taken in by her biological father, a Duke. With no relatives or families, she now had to stay in the capital of Eunoia, where she was shunned from every piece of information.
For a few years, she lived the life of a quite noble.
However, an unexpected turn of events led her to a secret route, and she got her hands on a suspicious book that stated her mother had been murdered. Did she live in a world of lies? Was her mother truly lost, or had she been murdered? She started feeling skeptical of every event that had transpired in her life.
But could seventeen-year-old, timid Luiza truly uncover the truth behind her mother’s disappearance? Find out by reading Secrets of the Loretto Legacy!
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This story takes part in the WSA competition. There will be daily updates and each chapter will be 1k- 2k long. This book will not be discontinued, and I hope you all can support me!
Thank you,
Luwy (moonflower414)
Reveal Spoiler
okay so let's get on to the plot of the story.... wait no, never mind. Such a great novel isn't worth it to be spoiled, you know? So I am not going to talk about the plot, but about the novel. It is definitely worth a try and I recommend it. you are fool for not reading it.
The story development, writing quality, and character design are all top-notch.... there might be sad and creepy sense early chapters... overall, it's quite good... and interesting to read...
If you enjoy a story that envolves murder mysteries, magic and kingdom schemes, then you may enjoy this novel. The tragedy and tone is so poetic and sad, that reminds the song 'Gavin Luke - The Crossing'. The author also do a good job of portraying the transitions of lifestyle and the way that the MC see the world.
I don't know what to start at. First of all a great Job author. The writing is vivid and captures the essence, the pacing is good. The main character, Luiza is likable and the story develops in a sense of mystery with her mothers disappearance to all the things that happened. The only problem is the update rate. Anyway great job author!
Okay... So, I read a few chapters and... The world building was great! However, the conversation felt like it could still improve. I suggest making their lines more natural. 🥰 Overall, it was a great reading experience! Great work, and more chapters~!
You believe how I inhaled the chapter 💀. Starts of interest and gets tense right off the bat. I can't help but hate some characters and rage when had things happened to MC I was: "Get away from the baby you--" ahem, you get the gist. Writing style sucks you into the world, the emotions of the characters! Don't dilly-dally and start reading this beautiful piece of work✨ -3-
First of all, for those who might think it's just an ordinary mystery and romance novel, let me clarify that it will definitely surprise you! The author knows how to depict bloody events and the dark side of the world, and it has a gripping plot with an explosive opening. I can confidently say it's worth your time! Well done, author!
I like the character's personalities because they jump right out of the story which is good in view. I like how the character interacts with the other characters. good work Author
ahh its good it gives me one of that series of nickelodeon vibes you know that one who is human accidently got in a magic school anyway Its really good the 5star is deserved
The author's style of writing and good use of grammar deserves a load of appreciation. The character designs and world buildings are depicted so well and even the storyline is written so well, enough to keep you hooked. This being the author's first book is equally impressive. Kudos author!
It is based time line 1820 so a loong time ago that is really cool to begin with and btw they really explain the world good and I like the fact they began with the mother and daughter the first lines the author did a really good job on this👀
Its great! After reading some chaps I can say the worldbuilding from the very beginning is clear and big, the descriptions are imaginary and the story is quite swell. give it a go!