The Yandere Villainess Is Obsessed With Me!

This story has a lot of potential and has a nice pragmatist mc. Hope the author doesn’t drop

TLDR: Most of the novel (based on the first 28 free chapters) is MC having an internal monologue with barely any story development, would not recommend. Grammar is good. If you like the story not really going anywhere while the MC has an internal monologue about EVERY SINGLE INCONSEQUENTIAL LITTLE THING, then search no further because this is your novel. Honestly it feels like 80% of what I read in the first 28 chapters that are free were the MC's internal monologue. Other authors would have made the same development last maybe 10 chapters but here it feels like there is no time for anything to happen because the MC just wont shut up inside his head. And the worst thing is that on multiple occasions he ends the chapter on an internal monologue and starts with one just to repeat almost the same stuff that he said last chapter. Grammar is good, Character design is nothing special, there is a good amount of background lore but it all doesn't matter because the story just can't seem to progress anywhere. ____BEWARE SPOILERS FROM HERE____ In 28 chapter all the MC managed to do was: - Arrive in the "tower" - Team up with "original MC of the story" - Get out of the starting cave - Kill some goblins - Swim in a mana water lake to get stronger - Kill some more goblins in the goblin camp All the actual story development mentioned up here makes up probably 6-7 chapters worth of words. The rest was MC talking to himself in his head about how he needs to get stronger and sharing random lore pieces with the reader.

Great novel so far, but I hope the chapters will be uploaded quickly. At least I hope the first 7 chapters will be downloaded 😁😁🙂🙂😢😍😅

Good story, enjoying the main character and world building. Mainly making this review to ask the author if he's gonna fix the chaps. cheers and keep up the good work author.

The story is good but you can't access the locked chapters, unless you have free reading voucher.

I cant seem to buy anymore chapters, it just pops up that a problem as happened… Still great novel and my favorite so far🍪 (please someone help me with the buying problem)

Really liking the main character and even the other characters that have been mentioned. So far the story is pretty good with massive potential the author has set themselves up for down the road if they can keep the character building along with the world building going in the right direction. I’m not one to mind info dumps in general but there are some repeated info paragraphs that I’ve noticed when talking about the tutorial floors. Also if author could fix the chapter issues and editing problems from chap like 41 on I really wouldn’t have complaints I’m general about the story. Hope the author doesn’t drop this one I’m really liking it

it's a very solid start. we know little about the FMC but so far she is a psycho with a mental breakdown. so instead of a quick read about a yandere liking mc out of nowhere you have a solid tower climber ( tower of god vibe) where MC , a talentless individual use his knoweldge to gain opportunity. i really enjoy the read so far. from author note it's seems it will more about the process about how FMC will slowly became a yandere

A vulgar story There are some toxic points in the beginning Why do you make him seem obsessed with a novel and fictional characters Even if he hates his life it is impossible that a novel is a person escape This is a stupid thing to start your novel with You can say that he loved her but there is no need to flirt And show it as if his only goal is to read a novel This is very toxic