An exploration of possibilities of shirou emiya, a character who always felt shackled by the wheel of FATE. If an injured soul merges with the body that will one day be called the "wrought iron hero" how far we can stretch fate...
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well, this is a try to take one of my most liked and disliked characters for me and see how could they have been as the name says a probability with the least tragedy as the world of nasuverse is allergic to happy endings without trauma. There is no system here even tho I personally like them but a system will defeat the point of this plot ohh and there will not be all sunshine and rainbows as in fate that's realistically not possible. so let's get this started !!
(I don't own the type moon stuff the ocs are my creation and all other stuff belongs to the original creator.)
I will just say few lines after reading till chapter 17 is that: One of the most striking elements of this novel is its commitment to staying true to the complex, often harsh realities of the Nasuverse. The author makes it clear from the outset that there will be no easy victories or unearned happiness. The world that Shirou navigates is fraught with danger, sacrifice, and the ever-present shadow of tragedy. This adherence to the darker aspects of the source material ensures that the story remains grounded and resonant, avoiding the pitfalls of overly idealistic narratives. I will recommend you to give atleast 7-8 chapter a read before you decide on anything[img=coins]
The novel’s premise is both intriguing and ambitious. By taking a character known for his struggles against the predestined paths laid out before him, the author opens the door to a multitude of "what if" scenarios. The core of the narrative is a profound question: How far can we stretch fate? This central theme is expertly woven into the fabric of the story, providing a rich tapestry of alternate possibilities for Shirou Emiya’s journey.[img=update]I want more chapters
As far i was hoping it to be bad but it's quite good and interetsting... I have read these kind of novel before but there is certain charm to this one Hoping the author to refine in work more and provide more world building Ps: i will update my review if i see an upward trend or downward in future[img=recommend]
So well so far, writing and pacing is alright. Characters are depicted well. This fic has potential and I am excited to see where the author takes it to. Keep up the hardwork mr. author! take my 5stars of encouragement!
What truly sets this novel apart is its exploration of Shirou Emiya as both a beloved and contentious figure. The author’s personal investment in the character is palpable, lending the narrative a sense of authenticity and passion. This duality—of admiration and frustration—adds depth to Shirou’s portrayal, making his journey all the more compelling. Readers who are familiar with Shirou’s canon struggles will find themselves engrossed in this new take, as it invites them to reconsider and reimagine his path.[img=recommend]
It’s pretty ok 👍
To maintain the tradition here is my shameless 5-star self review . . . . . . . . . . . . .
theres nothing new into this its just shiro being shiro this thing is no different from light novel though the light novel is still better i thought it was transmigration but its just shiro so yeah its boring
The novel was pretty decent for the rest of similar genre out there in the wild. I would higly recommend to read this novel. Rest, the writing style is engaging, with a blend of introspective moments and dynamic action sequences. The author’s passion for the character and the universe is evident, and this enthusiasm is infectious, drawing the reader deeper into the story.
Fantastic writing improvements from the 1st ch to now, greatly appreciate your understanding of shirou as a character he is more selfish than what 99% of other fanfics portray him to be. Also excellent and believable progression some writers make him a Mary sue type character that can do no wrong and will never lose even though in the VN he loses every single interaction he has with a semi comptant enemy except for when he clearly has an advantage(Gil) or a genuine plan in place I mean there are almost 60 smt death scenes in the VN. Anyway much love for making this looking forward to more
There is 2 negative aspect of this novel, story is quite slow for me and i like fast paced one more. 2nd is that some character design have flaws need more fleshing out in the future. Apart from these points i like the story very much and give it a 4.6/5 for now.
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Considering that i read the 36 chapters whitout stop i can say i really like it. I can't wait for the next chapter.