Do you know the sentence 'I could have done it better?' I'm sure you do, because like the rest of the world you have said or at least thought about it.
Maybe you saw some guy cook and thought 'I could do it better' or some watched some tv show and though "I could have done better', but it doesn't matter.
I too am not innocent of such thoughts. I always believed, truly believed if I was in the same situation as the protagonists of novels 'I could do better'.
Since you already escaped reality by consuming mind-numbing content, why not just write a comment that the protagonist is an edge lord with the intelligence of a 10 year old.
You suddenly write a comment like 'If I was the protagonist ...' and hundreds of words later, your rant is finished.
But hey! People agree with you. They like your comment and you feel excited and proud about the attention you get, so you continue.
You continue to write comments and suddenly you call yourself a full fledged Reviewer, but...
What if...
What if you seriously...
What if you seriously became a protagonist with all the cheats, the girls, the danger and excitement of adventure?
Would you accept it?
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IDIOT, OF COURSE YOU WOULD, WOULDN'T YOU?
You probably would get turned even just thinking about all the beatiful woman by your side. Who wouldn't want to be OP (overpowered) and become king, emperor or ruler of the world?
ME!!!! That's who! ...at least...
Where was I? Ah, right.
After everything I went through, I don't care anymore about such childish fantasy's.
The only thing I want is... Revenge.
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I'm doing a rewrite from the beginning. Mc will get his first system upgrade after the Hunter Exam where it won't be useless anymore.
It seems unnecessarily complicated to me, this synopsis doesn't make you want to read it. .......................................................
pretty good just needs to be work on like describing mc's percentage for nen and how the system works and how he upgrades it and maybe do his nen as something that ramps up faster like a staff that has different modes like Shinigami from bleach and if so something like kenpachi or something similar to ichigo's or even ichibei
didnt read yet just becouse it hxh 😎 will read it after this
I had made a far more consistent and helpful review but this can't be helped much sorry. He is very immature for someone who has gone through so much, the psychological elements are done just wrong, sentient systems are annoying enough not constantly sabotaging the Mc and this one is sabotaging. Does some extremely stupid stuff near the phantom troupe such as deciding to attack a core member and being shocked when they get almost murdered. I have no attachment to any characters and hope at this point they die to give him an ounce of personality. Maybe it's just me...
very good novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesting story and has great potential
As the author, I just need to make the traditional 5 Star reviews