While I'm not sure what my actual rating would be as I'll go over and edit different chapters overtime correcting grammatical mistakes. I'll focus on the plot and not losing the essence of why I started writing this story first. Fair warning. I want this story to represent a life. Similar in pace to another story on this Webnovel called Training Pokémon. I won't be exploring an entire world of possibilities like that author wanted. I still want to write the possibility of a person such as me if I became part of the world of Pokémon.
3 months ago
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Tristan_009
I don't have enough to say not bad. I like it.......
While I'm not sure what my actual rating would be as I'll go over and edit different chapters overtime correcting grammatical mistakes. I'll focus on the plot and not losing the essence of why I started writing this story first. Fair warning. I want this story to represent a life. Similar in pace to another story on this Webnovel called Training Pokémon. I won't be exploring an entire world of possibilities like that author wanted. I still want to write the possibility of a person such as me if I became part of the world of Pokémon.
I don't have enough to say not bad. I like it.......