The Dream Shifter

The author of this story here. This might just be some shameless self promotion but this is the first time I am writing a story and would encourage all feedback no matter positive or negative so I can improve myself as a writer.

Yuki feels real. He has flaws, loves, falls and all the complexities to make an intriguing character. While he begins as rather wimpy, watching him grow is a very satisfying read, and I urge readers to give this piece a chance. You need to read past the first chapter to where the book really starts to shine. I also really like the slive of life feeling at the very beginning, and the odd relationships Yuki has with other characters. Odd, but fun. If that makes sense?

Love the synopsis. Very unique, I haven't seen anything like it before. I will definitely be reading this like a mad man. Keep up the great work and carry on.

Like any normal reader, I was entranced by the book cover and the title... Then I was in for a satisfying ride when I started reading the chapters, as this is a rather fresh take on fantasy from most stories I've read. The protagonist is also realistically weak, and a bit of an oddball with his vivid daydreaming and head in the cloud personality. I'm glad that he's surrounded by friends instead of being asocial lol. His reaction to the fantastical world is simply true and with the author's skills in writing... a wonderful tale is born for us to read!

Very unique story, your wordings and how you write is precisely smooth, it is readable and I enjoyed reading the first chapter so as knowing the characters especially Yuki, I like the plot terms you made and your creativity they have potential. Me... is also a an Author who's hardworking to enhance my writing skills so being said that you write so well is something to be proud of. Good Luck Author! keep up the good work.

Oh my...this story is amazing and quite fascinating. I like how the plot and storyline are written. I love the combinations of genres in this story. The character build up and world background are good. Grammar wise and structure wise....I have nothing to say. IF YOU WANT TO UNDERSTAND WHAT I AM SAYING PLEASE READ THIS NOVEL FOR YOU TO SEE. Congrats author-san for your great work. Keep the story flowing.

This an interesting tale of Yuki and his survival in a world where has to fight. He is an MC that you want to read more off and how overcome his struggle as he more of the average side when it comes to MC. The battles in this story are also good and captures you into them.

Wow, I’ll say it first. Love the MC, Yuki. Though he maybe too timid for me at the beginning but guess that’s how it is for novel like this. Love Yuki cos me too, I’m a daydreamer. Can’t seem to focus and keep my head up in the cloud. So hi Yuki, you got a friend here 😂 Now onto the writing, what I really love from your story is actually your writing style. Your description of an event or an area were nicely done. It made me imagine the scenario in my head easily. Love your rich vocabulary and the smoothness of the transition in the story. The only issue is the paragraph being too dense. It lessens the tension in your story and it’s not so easy in they eyes. But yeah that’s about it I guess and some minor grammar errors which not really affecting your story. It’s still AWESOME 🥳 Keep up the good work author! May your novel appear in the trending list!

This novel is good . I like how you put the action through in it . Yuki can be some times cute and stubborn but that only makes him more realistic . I cannot point any grammer errors as i am myself a beginner . About the development of the characters you are going a good job . Keep it up . So far the novel is good . Well keep writing .

People like Yuki are present in many schools and colleges. He is a daydreamer and a strange character, not able to get along with his class fellows. I have read a few chapters. After the first chapter, does he start to change. Writing quality is good, Stability of updates is good too as already 90 plus chapters have been published. The story is developing. Will come back to read more later on. Character design and world background is equally good. All the best.

The novel began to read chapter 1, quietly grew into 10! Easy to read, romance, school, supernatural! I liked the construction of dialogues, they are live, as if watching an anime, and with high quality! The novel breathes, the characters are active, the novel itself is fascinating! What I especially liked was the dialogue! Thanks to the author for such an interesting novel! Yours faithfully

I am still dipping my toes into the literary fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Turns out, this book works for me! The names of the characters sounded Japanese, and so they gave me Anime-ish vibes (Yuki, Momoko, Saki). The ambiance (how you set the settings) is good, and text is also grammar-wise. Good job! Best of luck in your writing.

Very well crafted, this story. Minimal error to speak of and dialogue flows naturally. I honestly have very little to say without going into the nitpicks. That's a testament to how silid the riting is. Keep on keeping on good Author 👍

Hello! As thanks for the review swap, here I am! Please don't expect some kind of expertness from me for I am not a professional editor. Okay, let's start! Your story doesn't have any wrong grammars and typo, and It's actually a good thing(unlike me). The main character can be realistic, he has flaws, strength. Well, keep writing more because I'm going to bid this story good luck.