A young teenage girl (Kasumi Yamazaki) struggles from a broken home while a young investigator (Ex Takahashi) suffers from internal turmoil. Both of these characters randomly get powers that forces them to work together to stop unknown creatures from destroying Japan. There are a bunch of obstacles along the way, but for some, power becomes too much. Will the power devour Kasumi or will the struggle become too much for Ex? Read to find out!

kasumi

Good story. I read the initial chapters and its really good. i liked the story development and characters too. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

The synopsis is interesting & it hooked me to read the story further...I liked how the author used the book title Kasumi from the Protagonist...There are a few minor errors that can be corrected by the author...The author's writing style is well written & dialogues are fantastic...Good work, Author! 

Pros: I am intrigued by the synopsis of the story. The fact that you have the name of the protagonist as the title is interesting. I wonder why we Kasumi was chosen as the title and not Ex. I can tell you focused your time to these characters as the dialogue is believable. 

Cons: Just some minor grammar and tense changes in synopsis, first chapter. The beginning scene of the alarm clock beeping is a bit cliche, oftentimes starting a story with an onomatopoeia is not the strongest intro. I wish more chapters were not paywalled!

Great work altogether! I hope you enjoy the Review. let me know if you need any other reviews!

