Viltrumite In Marvel World

The beginning is a little rush is better to take it slow. Also don't make every girl to immediately fall love with the mc. But so far the fanfiction got potential.

Randomly adds The Flash which makes zero sense and just three the entire story into nonense. Just forced and ruined the story.... fix the title if you are going to have a DC/Marvel fanfic. Never read/found a fic where both universes actually worked or was completed. Just a waste of reading the first 17 chapters.

You first got my curiosity now you have my full attension.................................................................... keep up the good work

I'm a bit weirded out because you can't see those haters commonly seen in every novel. 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

Whelp, at first I thought this story was amazing. And it was, at first, in the begging but then the story became worse and worse. And the bad writing quality does not help either.

would have been a great story if not for the freaking harem. sucks to see so much potential going down the drain,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

It was very good but author needed conflict. He made it be making Mc forget stuf. All this drama could have been avoided. Mc randomly discovered that he cant use full power and had to die to remake his body. Stalling tactic by author to create bad situation for Mc to fix...

trash just trash .

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This is epic!!!! I've only red a few chapters but I love it already. I also love how he made his own starlabs and watchtower, can't wait for other references from DC or something else. Keep it up Author, ur the best🦾🦾.....

The MCs girls get with 4 big guys and MC becomes a cuck and wears the green hat.

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This novel need exposure one of the best novel I have read on this platform I won't be explaining the novel but will suggest to have a read you won't be disappointed.

The story and the idea behind it was actually the best I’ve seen compared to others on this app. The story development was excellent and overall was very good, but that’s really only until like chapter 55 I think? where he came back after his death. After that I don’t really see how the story can continue to maintain the good trend and you can tell it’s starting to deteriorate because it has harem. It’s not like I’m hating on it because I don’t like when there’s harem in the story or anything, but the authors trying too hard to please the fans or what not and starts to forget to make the characters feel like an actual character and just start throwing them into the harem and making the story predictable from a mile away.