The Venom That Saves
“Who are you? A dormant were wolf or a human?”
His voice broke as he spoke. His eyes were silently pleading, anxiously waiting for the answer. Deep down, he knew it already. Yet, his stubborn heart refused to concede. The silence that followed was enough to escalate the hurt he felt in his heart from a dull throb, to burning glaring pain. The bullet wound he received a year ago hurt less than what he felt at that moment.
“Here you go. It’s time to end this forever. Let’s make it fun while it lasts.”
He handed her a shiny golden revolver. One look and she knew, neither could survive a shot between the eyes. There was only one bullet in the gun. Her hands shook as she tried to let go, as though it burnt at her skin. Kai didn’t let her. He won’t have any of it. This was his surrender.
His eyes spoke words that his lips couldn’t. They were raw with emotions both familiar and foreign to her. Her own silver eyes filled with tears as she tried not to cry.
“I choose to die by your hands. You are the only one with the right to take my life. Let’s begin!”
He didn’t wait for her to process his words before helping her place the gun between his eyes, which never wavered from hers.
Click! Click! Click!
“Noooooooo!” She screamed as she dropped the gun.
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Hello there. Author here. I dont know how this work will turn out to be but I am going to reward myself for the hardwork. I hope you will enjoy reading this as much as I enjoy writing it. kindly, leave your reviews and comments. it will help increase the books rating and promotion. Additionally, Critisms are welcome, just try do it in a way that isnt rude or insensitive. Thank you.. Note that, the work will be edited much later after it's done. Before I sign out, I would like to thank you all for the support you give my work. its greatly appreciated.♥️
I have only read to chapter 20 and I must say that this book was great. The world design was fantastic and it was a great read. I personally like wolves so this book really suits me. However, I hope there wont be too many killings in the future chapters (for the lot and all :)) But, nonetheless, good job Author! [img=recommend]
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