A failed game developer/avid gacha player dies and reincarnates as Paul Notos Greyrat in the world of Mushoku Tensei. Everything appears normal at first, but things change rather drastically on the eve of his 5th birthday...
I will tell you what I feel, there isn't much criticizing about English, conversation doesn't seem forced so it's a novel with good potential 👍
But ... Mc is really annoying, he is whining, like everytime. He even have some strange feeling for 5-6 age girls, like you are so young, you shouldn't feel that much but... *sigh
I love seeing these traits in mc
* confidence
* smart
but I didn't see any confidence in mc, he is always worried, I know you have responsibilities but that doesn't give an excuse to say it repeatedly till it becomes annoying.
And he summons too many characters, it took away all the fun when you have too many.
Pro:-
Mc being kind .
Try it yourself and you will find whether it's good or not.
Current reading status:- when he summons diona(around 25 chapter I think)
3 years ago
86
Lonesome_Ghost
I haven't read it but the author is one best one on this platform. Don't disappoint me, author.
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3 years ago
74
Fanfic_Researcher
Best author in the platform, there is nothing more needed to say. I don't even need to read the story to know it is good👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
3 years ago
48
Researcher12345
I have read the all the chapters and i can say that this story is not my cup of tea.
Even though the focus is on the mc he feels like a side character when it comes to personal strength. He is weak, without talent, and a {good type of personality}/{he is not cruel or lower moral limits.}. The only thing that he has is extreme determination, and great stamina for s*x.
2 years ago
24
please_be_gentle_
cuckers getting happy reading ntr and defending it.........................................................................................................
2 years ago
19
History_Dreamer
Einlion! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!
DON'T INCLUDE NTR IN THIS MASTERPIECE OF A NOVEL!!! MY INSTINCT ARE SCREAMING AND WARNING ME THAT THIS STORY ARE GOING TO GET DARKER AND DARKER FROM HERE ON OUT!!!
3 years ago
19
MunirSM
It's a good novel that's for sure, but it's really not my cup of tea, more so for a fanfic. I admittedly have only read about 20 chapters, but so far the MC feels like a glorified side character. He is needlessly untalented, especially when he should NOT be so.
I understand the author is trying to give his work an air of realism, but that could be done using the World background instead of stripping your MC. He could have honestly chose a nobody instead of Paul who was notoriously called a genius and it would have the same, if not better.
In a nutshell, it's a good novel, but the MC can be frustrating. Give it a try and judge.
3 years ago
14
XxErnestoxX
Reveal Spoiler
2 years ago
13
Anime_World_6808
it's good fanfic but I can't I really can't.
it has good grammar, a good world-building, good character development, conversation between people is very smooth and feels real
my problem is with mc: not very confident, very unstable with his emotions, very untalented unnecessarily so
it's good fanfic but not my cup of tea so try first then judge.
2 years ago
9
GoldShiresInn
Reveal Spoiler
3 years ago
8
El_Tobi0999
The author has a great ability to make amazing plots. But my only problem with this fanfic is the MC. It feels the mc is just a side character. Even though I know he would probably have character development. I am too impatient to wait for that to happen. Sometimes, I would prefer a more ruthless MC. But other than that I recommend reading this fanfic.
3 years ago
7
Boaz_Michaeli
I read some of the author previous works
he improved a lot since his earlier days
please don't drop this i realy want to know were this is going
and please don't collect too many waifus
try and limit yourself this time please cause that's more or less the reason i quit EPIC
3 years ago
7
Oppas
Writing quality is topnotch, not expecting anything less from the Og , The fanfic is really interesting as the author mixed both mushoku tensei and genshin impact, and ocourse since genshin impact is involved there will be harem, The harem part is pretty enjoyable with enough interactions as to make their personalities apparent . There are few things that give me the ick but it makes the story more interesting.
For people wanting to know if its ntr or not ( bit of spoiler)
Some people complain that their is Ntr but there is no such thing; The mc summoned kaeya of genshin who is genderbend started having relationship with other men wich is oke since she didn’t like the mc and the mc didn’t like her, maybe it gaves you the vibe of it, I personally dont like it but dont take it as ntr but as mutual reationships - Later the mc and kayea started liking each other
3 years ago
5
oDEMIURGEo
And another perfect story from Ein. It's obviously 5 stars.
Thank you Ein for always giving us high quality stories. ( ͡❛ ᴗ ͡❛)
Ein wrote this. That's pretty much all you need to know. ... ...I can't post with just that many words, apparently. So... "𝘔𝘺 𝘯𝘢𝘮𝘦 𝘪𝘴 𝘠𝘰𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘬𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘒𝘪𝘳𝘢. 𝘐'𝘮 33 𝘺𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘰𝘭𝘥. 𝘔𝘺 𝘩𝘰𝘶𝘴𝘦 𝘪𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘯𝘰𝘳𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘵 𝘴𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘰𝘧 𝘔𝘰𝘳𝘪𝘰𝘩, 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘷𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘢𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘐 𝘢𝘮 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘮𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘥. 𝘐 𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘬 𝘢𝘴 𝘢𝘯 𝘦𝘮𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘺𝘦𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘒𝘢𝘮𝘦 𝘠𝘶 𝘥𝘦𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘦𝘴, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘐 𝘨𝘦𝘵 𝘩𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺 𝘥𝘢𝘺 𝘣𝘺 8 𝘗𝘔 𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘭𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘴𝘵. 𝘐 𝘥𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘴𝘮𝘰𝘬𝘦, 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘐 𝘰𝘤𝘤𝘢𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘥𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘬. 𝘐'𝘮 𝘪𝘯 𝘣𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 11 𝘗𝘔, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘮𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘦 𝘐 𝘨𝘦𝘵 𝘦𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘩𝘰𝘶𝘳𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘴𝘭𝘦𝘦𝘱, 𝘯𝘰 𝘮𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵. 𝘈𝘧𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢 𝘨𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘸𝘢𝘳𝘮 𝘮𝘪𝘭𝘬 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘥𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘵𝘸𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘺 𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘶𝘵𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘨𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘦𝘥, 𝘐 𝘶𝘴𝘶𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘯𝘰 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘣𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘴 𝘴𝘭𝘦𝘦𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘶𝘯𝘵𝘪𝘭 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨. 𝘑𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘢 𝘣𝘢𝘣𝘺, 𝘐 𝘸𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘶𝘱 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘢𝘯𝘺 𝘧𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘨𝘶𝘦 𝘰𝘳 𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘦𝘴𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨. 𝘐 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘭𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘯𝘰 𝘪𝘴𝘴𝘶𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘵 𝘮𝘺 𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘵 𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘤𝘬-𝘶𝘱. 𝘐'𝘮 𝘵𝘳𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘐'𝘮 𝘢 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘸𝘪𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘭𝘪𝘷𝘦 𝘢 𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺 𝘲𝘶𝘪𝘦𝘵 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦. 𝘐 𝘵𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘣𝘭𝘦 𝘮𝘺𝘴𝘦𝘭𝘧 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘢𝘯𝘺 𝘦𝘯𝘦𝘮𝘪𝘦𝘴, 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨, 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘸𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘴𝘦 𝘮𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘴𝘭𝘦𝘦𝘱 𝘢𝘵 𝘯𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵. 𝘛𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘪𝘴 𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘐 𝘥𝘦𝘢𝘭 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘴𝘰𝘤𝘪𝘦𝘵𝘺, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘐 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘪𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴 𝘮𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘴. 𝘈𝘭𝘵𝘩𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩, 𝘪𝘧 𝘐 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘧𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘐 𝘸𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥𝘯'𝘵 𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘢𝘯𝘺𝘰𝘯𝘦."
I will tell you what I feel, there isn't much criticizing about English, conversation doesn't seem forced so it's a novel with good potential 👍 But ... Mc is really annoying, he is whining, like everytime. He even have some strange feeling for 5-6 age girls, like you are so young, you shouldn't feel that much but... *sigh I love seeing these traits in mc * confidence * smart but I didn't see any confidence in mc, he is always worried, I know you have responsibilities but that doesn't give an excuse to say it repeatedly till it becomes annoying. And he summons too many characters, it took away all the fun when you have too many. Pro:- Mc being kind . Try it yourself and you will find whether it's good or not. Current reading status:- when he summons diona(around 25 chapter I think)
I haven't read it but the author is one best one on this platform. Don't disappoint me, author. ...............................................
Best author in the platform, there is nothing more needed to say. I don't even need to read the story to know it is good👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I have read the all the chapters and i can say that this story is not my cup of tea. Even though the focus is on the mc he feels like a side character when it comes to personal strength. He is weak, without talent, and a {good type of personality}/{he is not cruel or lower moral limits.}. The only thing that he has is extreme determination, and great stamina for s*x.
cuckers getting happy reading ntr and defending it.........................................................................................................
Einlion! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!! DON'T INCLUDE NTR IN THIS MASTERPIECE OF A NOVEL!!! MY INSTINCT ARE SCREAMING AND WARNING ME THAT THIS STORY ARE GOING TO GET DARKER AND DARKER FROM HERE ON OUT!!!
It's a good novel that's for sure, but it's really not my cup of tea, more so for a fanfic. I admittedly have only read about 20 chapters, but so far the MC feels like a glorified side character. He is needlessly untalented, especially when he should NOT be so. I understand the author is trying to give his work an air of realism, but that could be done using the World background instead of stripping your MC. He could have honestly chose a nobody instead of Paul who was notoriously called a genius and it would have the same, if not better. In a nutshell, it's a good novel, but the MC can be frustrating. Give it a try and judge.
Reveal Spoiler
it's good fanfic but I can't I really can't. it has good grammar, a good world-building, good character development, conversation between people is very smooth and feels real my problem is with mc: not very confident, very unstable with his emotions, very untalented unnecessarily so it's good fanfic but not my cup of tea so try first then judge.
Reveal Spoiler
The author has a great ability to make amazing plots. But my only problem with this fanfic is the MC. It feels the mc is just a side character. Even though I know he would probably have character development. I am too impatient to wait for that to happen. Sometimes, I would prefer a more ruthless MC. But other than that I recommend reading this fanfic.
I read some of the author previous works he improved a lot since his earlier days please don't drop this i realy want to know were this is going and please don't collect too many waifus try and limit yourself this time please cause that's more or less the reason i quit EPIC
Writing quality is topnotch, not expecting anything less from the Og , The fanfic is really interesting as the author mixed both mushoku tensei and genshin impact, and ocourse since genshin impact is involved there will be harem, The harem part is pretty enjoyable with enough interactions as to make their personalities apparent . There are few things that give me the ick but it makes the story more interesting. For people wanting to know if its ntr or not ( bit of spoiler) Some people complain that their is Ntr but there is no such thing; The mc summoned kaeya of genshin who is genderbend started having relationship with other men wich is oke since she didn’t like the mc and the mc didn’t like her, maybe it gaves you the vibe of it, I personally dont like it but dont take it as ntr but as mutual reationships - Later the mc and kayea started liking each other
And another perfect story from Ein. It's obviously 5 stars. Thank you Ein for always giving us high quality stories. ( ͡❛ ᴗ ͡❛)