A martial artist with a foul mouth and wild attitude has been reincarnated...buck naked in a cave that is. Why has he been reincarnated, why isn't he human, and why is his dick out? Find out as he explores this new world! See if he finds pants! Seriously, why doesn't he have pants?
[Disclaimer!!!]
As many of you may know, this novel is on hardcore hiatus and waiting on a reboot. Which I'm starting to do, I promise! It's gonna be in third person, it's gonna be better written and all that shit. It's gonna take me a lot of time though. I'm just one dude and I'm both really lazy and depressed. That said though, I really hope you enjoy the book. And check out the spin off!
A very nice story with one of the best descriptions I've seen. Got me hooked right from the first chapter. And also, the way the author ends with suspense is another bonus to the story. This book will definitely top the charts if it is updated regularly and has a better cover put on it.
Shameless five stars, like of course. But yeah its my first novel and the chapters are unbelievably short I know but it'll get better! I would appreciate any comments or criticism possible to help me improve as an author.
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Your story is creative, your creativity and imagination is complacent with the storyline, but the story is good, waiting for more chapters coming.
So far, I love this. It’ very entertaining for me and most books aren’t in my opinion. This is a great story. I mean, for this being your first novel you’r writing, it’s extremely creative.
Amazing but plssss pls update and what do you mean by pornography?
From what ive read so far, a fantasy novel focused on strength and not magic is def a W. great novel
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Nice concept, but maybe you can change the title a bit like 'I Unfortunately Reincarnated' or something like that, and for the synopsis, maybe you can make it a bit solid
A novel nudged to a nascent and natural quality by the conviction of a newbie novelwriter. If I may analyze it, there are numerous narrative qualities within the novel that display the needlework and neurons that the author would be willing to place within his work. Notwithstanding, the current novel and nappy manner of the writing is not negligible, though I nonetheless believe that the novelist has what it takes to summon his nebulous ideas and knack into a magnum opus in the near future. With that, I commend the novelist for their namesake and wish them a noteworthy noontime!