Carl The Jumper (original)
The author avatar, Carl, finds himself on one of those Jump Chain Adventures. [In the world of Desolate Era currently]
in this story the MC travels from one world to another to become stronger and better he has a jump chain system which lets him change the new world according to his like for some points he can chose to have a powerful background for some points or a commoner for free etc.
this is not my novel i ma just posting it so people will be entertained the original name is also same i didn't changed anything search the name and you will find the original
the worlds he travels to are
1. Buffy the vampire Slayer
2. pokemon
3. Farmville
4. history's strongest disciple kenechi
5. sword art online
6. Harry Potter
7. against the Gods
8. Stargate
9. ASOIAF (game of thrones)
10. dinosaur goutlet (free world not any movie or show)
11. azeroth
12. Naruto
13. desolated era
slow updates but it is still going it also has a harem not the Pokemon type harem but has a good size one.
original in fanfiction. net link
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13488233/1/
You acknowledge that this is a copy and gave homage to the original. I can respect that.
While I know that the story is a copy, it is really good and entertaining so it has my approval. Please keep updating this story.
first I want to say I am happy to see another jump chain story since they seem somewhat rare to find. Your story has a good start but there are two major problems I have seen so far. It would appear a lot of sentences are getting cut off on the side so you should look that over. Second, usually, the first 100 cp options for both perks and items are free for the origin you selected. Also, you might want to look up some supplements like body mod and warehouse.
interesting concept but the pacing is awful and the storying jumps around everywhere i dont even know whats going on anymore i feel like im on a bullet train like he driving home at the end of a chapter then next chapter outa nowhere he at another locations destroying a vampire next with a bunch of other characters with no buildup leading to this scene like there was barely a scene of him joining the gang
this is one of the good multiversal travel type novel. the only down side is the MC have no control in his travels
this is a great story and i hope you continue to make it.
You shold create a update status page that shows all his abilities and perks, his level and more. I like your story. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is great, it's a shame that the original author stopped writing chapters.
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