Acclimating Powers In Different Environments
Two technologically advanced races Humans and Gierriers have been fighting for years to eliminate each other. Gierriers consume souls to become stronger and strengthen their blessings, whereas Humans are chosen by the Wills of Dimensions to get skills and classes.
Clay Forth, an 18-year-old in Planet Fennec gets blessed with a never before seen ability relating to environments,
But how could this be possible? All dimensions have their own specific powers, yes some dimensions can have overlapping elements. But being able to get all types of power seems too broken.
>You are in a {Technological} environment
Calculating affinity…
{Technological} affinity: 37%
Reached 20% affinity
Obtained {Technological} class: Denizen of Technology
Obtained ability:
Author’s shameless honest review :) I believe I am a good writer and note taker so their shouldn’t be many mistakes. But if you do find one pls leave a comment saying “found a mistake” no need to even give a reason. I will check it and fix it. The only thing I am worried about is how often I can post. I will try my best to do 1 ch a day. But problems may occur. I am very proud of the world I have created. It will have basic elements you see in system novels. But I dont think that’s bad as basic are basic for a reason. For example I love military arks. I have planned out the major plots of the story and I find it incredibly beautiful. My favorite books are Lord of myteries, Super gene, Castle of black iron,Legendary moonlight sculptor, and Supramcy games. I have taken inspiration from these and hundreds of other books I have read.
I will get to each reason why and will update frequently maybe every fifty chapters 1:Writing quality- most is great writing quality the only issue is the lack of description and depth to the world and story which correlates to two other, there is also the fact that it doesn’t explain a lot about time, so it gets confusing, that’s why it got a three 2:Updating Stability- pretty standard not to the point where I can read a new chapter everyday but I can understand so I still gave it a 4 star 3:Story Developement- the story goes fast paced which doesn’t allow me personally to get a sense of depth with the characters and it kind of goes too fast with the affinities and gaining of abilities, that’s why I gave it a 3 star 4:Character design- we don’t really don’t get any defining features of the character like body build background or history so it makes it hard to envision it which is why it got a 2 star 5:World Background- we don’t get a lot of explanation about the world and what it looks like and we have no history of anything like families of the characters or anything like that so in my opinion that’ s why I gave it a 2 star I thank you for reading my review and don’t let it keep you from reading the story because the concept is great this is only here for the author to better his book, have a great day this will be updated when we reach 50 chapters so look forward to it