Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

MC somehow gets to Cyberpunk 2077 world or a few years before at least. Hasn’t gotten to “canon” but anyway he joins Trauma Team and we get to see the crazy stuffs Trauma Team gets to deal with every day. I love the situations and story. MC is slowly getting his “build” together and I can’t wait for more chapters!

The grammar makes me look twice every two seconds to see if I misread something. The story is forced bs, i'd rather he had transmigrated directly into a newbie of the trauma team. The mc's reactions are generic and cringy. Also the whole "I predicted that i'm in trouble cause of a bad feeling" trope is a bit overused, especially in non supernatural power worlds. It's like what, did you unlock ultra instinct or something?

I can't wait to see what you do with this considering there's not that many cyberpunk fanfics out there. keep up the amazing work I'm rooting for you all the way

Not bad. Hopefully we can see an end to this fanfic. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Book is fine, author needs to touch up in grammar though, some characters speak like cavemen and the writing is inconsistent when it comes to proper grammar, punctuation and vocabulary, the author I also suggest should do some more research into firearms, the technical details of them, and weapons in general.. Writing quality is down to a 3 due to authors grammar inconsistentcy World background as well due to his clear lack of knowledge of military tactics and weapons and lack of research..

The concept of the fanfic is good, but fix your grammar first, bye

Overall a good novel but the grammar is beyond awful

I don’t write many of these reviews but I have to say this is a great novel. The author brought the character into the world a little off, but the growth and struggle while having a dark sense of humor that you would hear in the field helps paint vivid and interesting characters.

Just writing this review because I've kind of lost interest because of the fact that he will probably leave trauma team. I'm not sure if he does because I've not read that far but its the main reason I liked this fanfic, it was cool and unique to see a trauma team members daily life and without that its not as unique.

Liked the overall story, the various different cases, the small charcter development and pulling in different part of the cyberpunk world but the story gets distracting when there are writing errors or misspelled names/words. I would appreciate it if you would let me edit the story to fix those errors.

He needs to fix the grammar it hurts to read. please, author, get a proofreader.

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love it. its a cool and unique read. quality: 5. really good no problems. development: 4 i only put 4 because it doesn't seem to have much of a story but that's actually preferable to me. I just wanted people to know that right now its not that story driven, more just daily life of a trauma team member. design: 5 no problems from me. it would be nice if you added a bit more to the other team members that didn't get much attention but apart from that great. stability: 5 I'm not really sure about this one, I'll pit 5 stars but we'll just have to wait and see. background: 5 quite fleshed out. it doesn't seem like you just skimmed over the wiki which is good and I can tell there's heart in it.