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If she were to make the choice again, she would never have let her two-faced, sickly sister use her as a personal blood bank. She simply wanted to live her own life.
But in her previous life, she ended up neglecting that intimidating young boy.
When she escaped the hospital in an anaemic state with nowhere to go, she fainted in the streets. He brought her home, took care of her meticulously, and cherished her.
For countless long nights, he would kiss the ugly scar on her spine where they drew blood from her.
Even after her death, he went mad and broke into the funeral to take her ice-cold body.
Returning to when she was 16, Ji Bai seemed to not be afraid of him. When he stared at her from a dark and gloomy corner, Ji Bai looked back at him with a sweet smile and wanted to spoil him.
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The translation is not good. à lot of mistakes like "your" instead of "her".
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I like the plot. ML being a bad boy is novel to me. the painful part is the writing. there's no editing at all.
bad translation. hard to understand because of the translation, story jumps around.
i actually like the plot and how the story developed. it's like one step at a time. But deym i dont have any free pass lol
does anyone know the raw of this story ? I really liked the story but there are a lot of error.
Bad translation. Can’t really follow the story at all
To be honest the book is good BUT if you can edit it, it's going to be GREAT
Dear Heaven but this is hard work - the story is fascinating but the writing is A W F U L . This is obviously an MTL with very little editing. if anyone has the good will to edit this they'll have all my fps!!
The translation is terrible. It is not just the he's and she's mixed up. It must be an auto translation.
My head hurts from reading bad translation. it’s like a caveman was talking in my head.
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The ok: The plot is interesting but standard. It's regression scapegoat, golden child sibling, and neglectful parents. Scapegoat FL is supposed to be the golden child's blood bank and after regression FL wants to escape. ML is the bad boy type who gets in an accident. The problem is the translation. The author lacks a grasp of the English language and it shows. Pronouns are wildly inaccurate, turns of phrase are wrong, and grammar is non-existent. I skipped entire paragraphs of word salad. So if you don't mind Godzilla had a stroke level of writing occasionally it's a decent story to waste fast passes on. Don't spend your coins though.
such an amazing story and extra chapters are very beautifully written......I am tearing up after reading the last chapter.....but they thought it was their father and daughter secret but they don't know Xiaobao the first one who has gone back there to change their destiny and life...such a funny thing....but I am now because now both parallel worlds are living happily....but all this related to our protagonist both mother and daughter love him so much like I do three person World involved each other😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍 thankyou author for writing such a wonderful story....i hope i will read more your wonderful stories❤️❤️❤️
Give it a try, you won't regret it! If you look past the wording and sentence construction, you will realize the potential of this novel. First time giving a review but this is worth it!