Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

The mc sucks. A fantasy about smoking weed and being a loner. Also being a super awesome biker in Twilight. Not seeing much personality besides that. Not even hints of a more interesting one :/ Would've stuck around to give it a better chance, but when I saw the story wasted our time describing him selling weed it was too hard to ignore what this was about. Writing Quality - 3 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 4

In short MC is a system user who is also a drug adict and smokes EVERY time; he is mister perfect everyone likes him for being a drug dealer. Teachers like him even thou he is being late EVERYTIME but are ok with why? because he has good grades yeah!!! police let him break the law multiple time reason? because Plot!!! Best Friends Parent's likes him why because the MC give they own kids drugs yeah!!!

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All I see is drug addict emo kid who think he is superior to all Truth to be told i don’t se any character development 24/7 he just want to be high

Half the story is just him being high and so ping for a girl. Everyone likes him even his coach even tho he knows the mc is like the biggest drug dealer in the school. Then his personality is kinda trash with an average plot line. Author also didn’t post for like 2-3 weeks cause he was setting up some patreon thing and is putting the fic behind a paywall for a barely average fan fic

The mc is your typical smartass deliquent that makes you wonder if he is a reincarnation or just an oc with a system and foreknowledge. There are some few grammatical errors but it doesn't seem a major problem yet. The interactions are okay but it needs more work so that it wouldn't feel awkward. Overall, I might change the rating if there's further improvement in the writing.

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Great fic so far.I highly recommend it. Trust me, you only need the first chapter to lock you in, and you will know for yourself if you would like it or not.

good until he introduced a Rosalie as a mate and still chose the character he made his celebrity crush (even tho he did that in his other story too) and picked shifter powerset which is crazy for someone whose supposed to look like urek mazino. The dialogue is mostly the main character getting high or simping for ana de Armas and her family. And i do mean simping because the MC's 2 modes are when he's with her and when he isn't.

Goated story, don’t listen to the other reviewers who are simply mad due to the Mc smoking habits. It is refreshing for once to not have a basic copy pasted Mc in a reincarnation webnovel fanfic. The story is grammatically very good, pacing is not too fast not too slow in my opinion and helps follow the Mc through both his thought process and actions. The Mc has Sims like powers, that are pretty well done, allowing him to not be OP. I would recommend this story to anyone that isn’t a braindead generic webnovel reader who is looking for an actual good story with actual plot.

Good story as of chapter 11 so I think picking shifter power wise is a lil dumb

5|4|1|2|3 meh...it's mid. 3 main things about this fic: 1. mc smokes weed 2. he does a little simping (just a little) 3. he smokes a lot of weed XD ps. why is this in the TL section??

Need more this is a really good story and better than more other twilight fanfic

I've been following this book since the beginning and it's actually nice like the type that makes me wait for it throughout the day, I actually thought I had given it a review but just realised I hadn't, great job author.