Skill Forge: Broken Extra Character
Amidst the eerie silence of an unfamiliar hall, a cacophony of confused voices rose, mingling in a chorus of bewilderment. "Where are we?" "What happened?" "I thought I died!" Each utterance hung in the air, a testament to the collective disbelief gripping the room.
As the haze of confusion lifted, disjointed memories surfaced, fragments of lives cut short by tragedy. "I remember... I was stabbed..." ventured one voice, echoed by another's affirmation of a similar fate. "I... I died in a plane crash," muttered a third, only to be met with a stunned agreement from a fellow survivor.
Amidst the chaos of bewildered voices, one man stood apart, his expression a mask of contemplation amidst the turmoil. As his companions recounted their brushes with death, his mind churned with questions, each more confounding than the last.
"I got shot... I remember it vividly," he murmured to himself, his voice barely audible above the din. "So how am I still here?" The enigma of their shared resurrection gnawed at him, compelling him to seek answers in the depths of his memories.
With each revelation of a paired demise—a male and female, bound by the same tragic fate—a flicker of recognition ignited within him. "This... this seems familiar," he mused, the pieces of a puzzle slowly coalescing in his mind. But the picture remained incomplete, obscured by the fog of uncertainty that shrouded their surroundings.
As the words "pairs, pairs, pairs" echoed in his mind like a cryptic mantra, a sudden realization struck him with the force of a revelation. "It can't be... don't tell me..." he whispered, his voice trembling with disbelief. With a sense of urgency, he began to scan his surroundings, searching for any sign or clue that could confirm his suspicions.
Then, as if guided by an unseen force, his gaze shifted upwards, and there, bathed in an ethereal light, stood an angelic figure with golden apparel, its gaze fixed upon him with a warm smile. The sight took his breath away, filling him with a mixture of awe and trepidation.
The man's heart raced as faced a real angel, his mind struggling to comprehend the surreal encounter unfolding before him. The angel's words, spoken with an air of amusement, only deepened the enigma shrouding their meeting.
"I never expected anyone to notice me," the angel remarked, a hint of playfulness in its voice. "I was concealing my presence to let everyone fully calm down, but to think someone noticed me. Just who are you?"
Ethan's disbelief and confusion intensified at the angel's question. "Eh... Ethan Rivers," he stammered, his voice barely above a whisper.
As Aurelia, the angel, finally revealed himself to the bewildered assembly, a hush fell over the room, each soul drawn in by his radiant presence and commanding aura. Ethan's gaze lingered on Aurelia.
"Greetings, lost souls," Aurelia declared, his voice resonating with a majestic power that seemed to fill the very air around them. "I am Aurelia, and I shall be your guide to your new life."
As Aurelia extended his arms in a gesture of welcome, Ethan felt a surge of rage and hesitation, "This it bad, really bad."
Ngl, this story is quite immersive, its got those kingdom building vibe, reincarnation, OP cheat, Wholesome Family, fantasy, and other all those mainstream genres out there, I feel like there’s no harem here cuz the females are not that adorable but nevertheless competent, that’s more amazing than those weak females who just stands there and then have minimal character development, oh and though I say they are competent, I did not mean those females that are OVERLY competent in which they have FLAWS that’s much to be desired, like those obsessive yandere girls or those very assertive ho*s. One thing to point out is that it’s not perfect, there are holes from here and there which makes the world building incomplete, the Author has not yet solidified the foundation of the story and it mainly focused on MC’s POV for like 90%. and 10% are to other extra. I would like for the author to balance the different sides to give us the clear image of the whole story. I would like to learn the the MC’s family, the Nobles, the Royalty, and much more, yet the author did not include such information in the initial chapters where MC was learning, it just skipped like A LOT. The author even skipped where he got those materials for financial and he only highlighted one battle lol, so much skipperoo in this story lol, that’s why I said there are holes to the story. There are no costs in some skills, and a certain skill is really Overpowered despite only have a Rating A in which mc abuses all the time. The only saving grace why this novel is good because it has good depth to it despite being there being many plot holes. But I think author can readjust such story and look forward to it when he revise this story cuz its really good, hope he can keep going and stay strong!💪
Brilliant. Reading only the synopsis and I am already hooked. I just wish the author would update more😫
As someone who’s not so familiar with fantasy books, I’d say this one was pretty easy to read and understand–a gripping tale. The only thing is, I’d have liked a bit more exposition for those that don’t exactly understand how video games work because I was a bit confused about the whole concept. My favorite character has to be the one with the loud mouth, the female, I think her name starts with a J? We’re kinda alike.
This book should be highly recommend, I love it already especially stories like this reincarnation and so The genre is nice kudos author more knowledge
My major turn off is the mc always talking about things he could have just saw and said in his mind but most is always aloud
need fastttt updateeeddddddddddddddddddddd
Feels a bit choppy but I atleast can tell there's some heart in this. If I had to describe it to someone it kinda reads like a lighthearted shounen novel for some odd reason. Jett our MC gets since into a world based on a game. He gets his little cheats and in theory has potential to become overpowered very early. Does it do it justice? Kinda? It's not perfect and you'll probably notice some errors on the way with skills and percentages. I can't say it's top tier for me and gets me hooked personally. I think it's nice but there's something missing that keeps me invested. I'm not quite sure what it is though. Maybe a goal? Not the become the strongest in the world that's for sure. Give it a try is my best recommendation. Score 7 out of 10. Personal Score is a 7 out of 10.
The writing skills of the writer was the first thing that quip my interest , but upon reading I realised that the novel has a good story line ❤️
nice job. continue to write, I was really attracted by the plot too.
Great story from the author, I love it ❤️
Very nice lot and character design, keep it up Author
I’ve read up to the paid chapters, and it’s honestly not bad. I would say it’s slow to start with, hard to truly hook a new reader to stick with the novel and pay for the rest of the chapters. It has potential but with only 4 chapters a week I’ll wait a year to stack the story
The story is well written and the plot is also amazing i reccomend this one. It must try
This story is f*****g amazing, you should try it. Just in case you're a lover of an erotic, succubus themed story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Trust me, you'll love it.
Pathetic beta pushover behaviour Mc at least in chapter 5