Dragon Ball:Vados is my Wife
Kahn finds himself in the Dragon Ball universe as Kakarot's older brother after being sent to Earth by Bardock just before the destruction of Planet Vegeta. Initially, he struggles with his low combat effectiveness due to being a low-level fighter.
However, everything changes when the long-awaited system finally activates—under one condition: Kahn must marry. With the help of a matchmaker(chichi), he finds a stunning and supportive wife, Vados. As Kahn's strength skyrockets with his newfound abilities, he enjoys a stable and happy life with his gentle and virtuous wives.
But when the God of Destruction, Beerus, arrives on Earth, Kahn is left in shock as he witnesses Vados effortlessly overpower him. This leads Kahn to question his wife's true identity, asking, "Honey, are you really Angel Vados?"
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[This is just a translation!!]
Name: 人在西都：开局迎娶芭朵斯
Author: Sbaer
Story would be 4 stars if mc wasn't a Chinese retard. He keeps doing stupid shit like refusing to let Goku, his little brother, and the z fighters use the gravity room while keeping it a secret he has it. He also dosent warn them about the saiyans coming back or anything and gatekeeps all the ways to get stronger. He's the only one in the story allowed to grow stronger. Goku almost died to nappa and got one shot by dodoria on namek and mc acts like it was completely unavoidable, meanwhile he's being buffed by his system and training secretly without helping any of his "friends" or "family". He even brought Bulma to fight Frieza with him, even though he only has 10mil power level and knows Frieza is over 10x stronge. You gotta imagine he WANTED her to die so he can get ssj because that's the only reason he's be so retarded. Just another Chinese sociopathic piece of shit as an mc, trying to be protrayed as good, that ruins the entire story. Only reason this is 2 stars instead of 0 if I could give it is because the story itself is kinda good but the mc is horrendous
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hood story, but author keeps mixing the chapters in all the wrong orders and its confusing
i already know this fanfic and it is incomplete but it is really good fanfic
ignore a plothole, stepped over another plothole, tripped over a different plothole only to fall into a new plothole. [Ex.] Oh n0ess, the dragonballs are gone~ (they are clearly still there) since piccolo is dead we cant revive anyone, (kamis still alive doing morning pilates for health) thats whh we gotta go to namek for their dragonballs...... cuz somehow the informatikn on namek was shoved into my brain... like right now...and its where the next arc is! (nice save).
In the last chapters Vados was completely ignored and that was supposed to be the whole point of this story and was replaced with some other character, I also feel like it was rushed in the end as the author did a mass update. It was one of my favourite fics though and it was a fun read.
The more chapters that was uploaded, the lower the quality of the translation. Translator just copied and pasted from raw to ChatGPT to Webnovel. Low efforts, and didn't even bother to edit. If you want people to support you, at least put in some efforts to make it readable. Plot holes everywhere. For example, MC might get a new upgrade from the check-in, but the upgrades will change names to different upgrades out of nowhere in the later chapters. Also, the paragraphs kept repeating the same things just with more adjectives in most of the later chapters because of AI. Characters that shouldn't be in the scene appearing out of nowhere in the scene which messed with the reading experience. A lot of inconsistencies with the plots. Not recommended to read this. Don't waste your time on this since the translator just wanted to milk power stones with zero to low effort put into his translation.
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Not bad, but not great either. ........................................................................... ...........................................................................
Like saying this, this story has so many plot holes that it's scary... Also the MC is the most idiotic character I've seen in years of reading, not to mention the little trickery he gives to the world,
"This novel deserves WAY more recognition. The lore is deep, the action is intense, and the mystery elements make it impossible to put down!"
one of the best fanfiction of dragon ball
a good novel not at the level of a 3 stars but not at 5 either lets say if 4.4 or 7.7/10 a good level of fan fic and most obv not overly chinese vibe!!! finally i was dieing of cringe of other fan fics of dragon ball but this is OK!