Beerus the God of destruction dreamed about Veldanava asking him to take over the cardinal world and protect it for him... This is a story of a God from one world taking over a different world while starting from the bottom....
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While i do like the concept , I find it hard to like the story. It is not bad honestly, and maybe it's just me but i find it rushed. while i do understand the pride and power of Beerus , things seemed a bit too off scaled , and the relationships felt rushed and fake. I'll gladly give it a try if you ever rewrite it , but at the moment while i like the overall plan behind , i find it hard to get in the story. But do not let what i say stops you , improve yourself.
welcome to my 1st fanfic, what do you guys think, drop some comments