Death's Sovereign: Rise of the Forsaken

Hello there, as tradition goes, this is another shameless review by a shameless author. However, it is less of a review and more about what you can expect from this first creation of mine. I am a fan of both TradNovel and WebNovel, and you will find hints of that in my work. Whether it is 'Best of Both Worlds' or 'Worst of Both Worlds,' it is up to you to decide, my dear readers. Of course, my story is an Isekai with an edgy orphan guy; but he is neither very overpowered, nor very intelligent, or smart. He is just like me, or most of us. He is often cowardly, makes arrogant mistakes, and overestimates himself. Fair warning,- this story has a strong theme of romance. But it is no smut or harem. Rather, think of it as an action-adventure of two friends who have romantic feelings towards each other. There is often romantic tension between them. But they are not going to confess their love to each other (at least not in near future). Love here is another power for my Characters, just like the famous 'Power-of-Friendship'. This is mainly the story of Arin's journey to regain his humanity, as well as build his own power, an empire for himself, and unearth the secret of this universe eventually. I really hope you will enjoy reading this, just like I am enjoying writing this. Would love to hear from you, my dear readers. I want this 'Review' to be 'Question and Answer' thread as well. So, please feel free to ask any question/Suggestion you may have, here.

I just started reading it! enjoying it so far! it seems to be a descriptive writing style! I think you love it and have a flare for it! cannot wait to binge reading it hahaha!

So I will be give full stars because I did enjoy the story so far. Main issue that I could tell is complexity and depth of the characters and also their themes but it’s still an enjoyable story, the system and progression. For me personally I like to dive into a characters thought process but that’s just personal preferences. Also congrats on being signed and well done, hope the later chapters have the characters more developed

It's got a lot of potential but I can't stand the writing style (thats on me). The characters are a bit two-dimensional, they all seem to speak the same (in other words, it's like the author is speaking through them. They aren't quite their own people, ifykwim). I even skipped to the end but it doesn't seem to be fixed. The prose is all right even though it seems befitting for a trad novel. The plot develops at a normal pace. The vibes remind me of JJBA. I do hope the author fixes the formatting since it's hard to read on phone. In any case, I would recommend this book when it's reached a few hundred chapters. Good luck, author