Draconic Online

Good story but it doesn't have any substance. The MC is OK but nothing special(if you ask me is the same character as the MC in Shadow Rogue[see novel updates]). My advice is to build the MMO world and get MC a goal a purpose or make the MC a flat character[see https://***.aresearchguide.com/character-types-in-literature.html]. Like get a setting for the world and use the lore to influents the MC. And later in the story where the MC is at a crossroad use the narration to get him to kill people or something of that sort. AND GET A PAYPAL ACCOUNT (hate patrion). And me advice is is to use Grammarly for the edits.

Hmm Though the story starts a little bit slow and boring it become quite interesting lately. Though there is some grammar error it is still readable and not confussing. please pay attention to fighting scene especially the major battles of the MC. Please refrain from using broad terms such as "he slice him" (upward, downward ot sideward) or "he kick him" (where? In the foot, body, thigh or chest?) P.s. how much real time is equivalent to the game time? (1RT = 4GT?)

Was really enjoying the story, but the author just ghosted us with no news. Really want an update but i have nowhere to vent my frustrations except the review. come back author senpai

So far this story has been very interesting and eventful. I am enjoying reading it and I hope that I can read it until the end of the story.

Although very little of the story is released, the author has already built up a strong plot backbone. I’m really enjoying the well-developed personality of the main character. You won’t regret reading this! Please release more chapters!

I’m loving the book so far keep it going. I’m loving the fact it’s not a main stream character like a warrior class or mage. I think the story is well written so far an has an interesting story plot going so far.

Very interesting story, very different from the classic warrior or mage style profession. Also very stat heavy which is very interesting to see. Very good read and can’t wait to see how the story will progress. Keep it up.

I'm loving this story just got it yesterday and already finished all the chapters keep them coming please..................…..........................

Im not an assassin fan but I enjoy the story for what it is. I like how game isn't made to be balanced and i also like how it doesn't go far in the other direction with ideas like exclusive classes only a hmandful or players out of hundrends of millions could only unlock. Only complaint is how it follows other mmo reads out there with how much in game gold converts into thousands of dollars of real life money.

Perfect, now if only this story will not be dropped like most others, it will be perfect.. ®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®

Great novel so far, I like the way your going with the progression of the character. He isn't playing as a warrior like usual and is playing a stealth character who stays on the shadows. The way you make him get new quests from 'secret' people is cool too. Thx keep it up

Really like the story and authors writing style i feel the story is a bit rushed and theres not that much world background but besides that its really great and since most people know enough about games we dont need all the useless explanations about how stats work and whatever really recommend to read it

Have read to chapter 13, so far it’s worth reading. Would recommend this story bat this time. Not my top story by looking like the updates are good.

Author here! This is my first novel, so don't hold back on any constructive feedback. I think my novel has a ton of potential, and I have some great ideas to explore. My aim is to greatly improve my writing so I'll hold off on a five star review. Thank you for anyone who gives Draconic a chance!