Ranker's Quest

I did not read this book but the synopsis says it all. You want to avoid talking in the past tense when writing a novel. Also avoid switching between them in the same sentence

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Really great novel I am having fun reading it and hope it continues because I have been looking for a new novel for a while and finally found one

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I quite like the beginning and the premise of it. A world in which VR exists and is used for more than just games, though it has entered that frontier too. A story is about a ranker from the first VRMMO game that intends to go to the next one because the first game has finished. It does not seem all that special, but it is a twist that is not really used and I like it. The main character is a normal guy that has friends and a younger brother that will follow him into the game. I like the character design a lot, and have no complaints about it. World background is also interesting although it is just beginning. Fight on author.

An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.

These reviews don't really make sense because the story is not yet complete, but this is my initial rate for the author to show my support. Keep up the great work, and I hope that you can see this story through the end. Cheers! If you're interested, I could use some of your help too with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged).

Really good world and character background it was in every detail which also helps us to get familiar with the MC. I don't mind adding this my library and do a binge-reading.

The world is perfectly planned out and we have a good feel of the universe they are in, the cast is really enjoyable and the game dynamics are just dope af.

An elaborate story set in two conjoined worlds, virtual and reality come together to form the backdrop. I think this is a pretty high quality book that deserves more than it gets. I didn’t notice any major grammatical mistakes that would disturb the reading experience and enjoyed it through and through. So if you’re wavering to read this I think it’s at least worth to give it a try..

Honestly you’re good at your description, it was clean and you can clearly see the storyline. Hope this will be notice and gets an exposure. Keep working author-san

A nice story that I would definitely come back to in the future. Usually, I would have a problem with the System in these kinds of stories, but that problem is fortunately nonexistent here. The only problem I would have is with the flow, as it gets somewhat rocky in certain parts. The chapters are also a bit too long for my liking, but that would differ from person to person. Overall, great job!

Where do you even get these ideas? The descriptions you did for the world background is so clean and detailed. I'm impressed! Great job, author-san!

Great job. The synopsis is intriguing and enough to make anyone want yo read the story. There aren't any grammatical errors. I don't have any complaints. Keep on writing!