Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon

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The best fanfiction that I read in webnovel. I especially love how you go about being selfish self insert instead of goody two shoes type of character design. Please continue to update this story.

A sub-par harry potter fanfiction, but enjoyable anyway. There is a lot of problem in this story (too many to list them all) but it is normal as it's the first story of the author. It's frustrating because the story could have been so much better that what it is actually. If you like HP FF give it a try, you could be surprised.

Good story I hope the update schedule still continues. It's cool with his anigami and his concept of cores Who's the pairing though? -------------------------------------------------------------

The dialogue between characters is so flat. Other characters are so one dimensional that it's ridiculous. Having the characters respond back without any emotion doesn't help. (You need to use question marks to end sentences that are questions. Without doing that, it really throws off the flow of the story.) I hope you work on your character development as I like the plot of the story.

The story itself is beautiful, but the development is too fast, likewise the story came from the mc's POV, it would be better if some part would be told from the author's POV, at any rate I love the novel it's just that each chapter is a bit short...

Very good story. But now you are at this point you should slow down,give more detail. Because if you continue like this you will end this story in 40 chapters. And feel more like a summary than a story ...

This is one of the best Harry Potter fan-fiction you will read. I can only think of one other that is as well done. Author has an AMAZING stamina level as he pumps out at least 2 chapters a day. Also were most focus on the MCs time in school, Author will soon be focusing on the time after. Which is extremely rare for a fanfic to get to.

I think it is a good story. Especially the speed in which the story is written. I hope the story doesnt slow down too much because of Harry in bis followup years Thanks for the story 😊

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Really good H.P. novel, it has really good speed , great knowledge on the lore and a character that doesn’t stick to Harry’s little suicide group. I’m really excited for the future of this novel and definitely recommend you to read it. Anyway, bye

Seriously a hidden gem not found anywhere else. Since this story concentrate on the MC than basing on the Boy-who-lived. Not being the sidekick or the canon fodder helping the brat. This is truly a fanfic that visualized the epitome of an OC and more likeable not being along with a dupe canon protagonist and more beyond that.

Amazing Story although can get a bit fast with the mulitple time skips but it works out well and eventually fits really well with overall pace of the story. Great update speed and while a bit sketchy first few chapters editing wise, its generally high quality and standards!

The story is great and dose not seem to be ending after Voldemort dies and not only that mc dose not give a f*ck about Harry and main timeline just using them from time to time truly a great work.