Before, she was Jade Bell the strongest soldier. She was smarter, faster, stronger, and thanks to several painful science experiments a super human and her handmade hightech system.
But she was also a certified badass, killing scum without second thought and was noturious for stealing the girlfriends of who she considered, "shitty guys who didn't treat them right."
A femnist and helping those she saw who needed help. That was until her bastard father blew up her home and she died with her lover.
She unexpectedly reincarnated into the body of Zoe Chang a weak girl who was betrayed and abused by her family. Who manipulated her into arranged marriage by threating her mother's and brother's life.
To make matters worse her husband was a complete ass! He
1.Brought other women home and making her sleep on the couch
2.Moved several mistresses into the house
3.Calling her names like slut or whore for wearing anything above the knees and/or elbow
4.Constantly accused of her of cheating
5.Would encourage his mistresses to bully her
and the list just got worse and worse.
Jade then decided to take revenge for this poor girls suffering and figured while she was at it to test her husband's mistresses abilities in bed, and look for her lover's reincarnation.
It's not everyday you see a story like this. The female lead instead of winning a Male lead over she is lesbian and wants to get away from the guy. It already sounds super interesting.
The plot is amazing and the descriptive language paints a perfect mental image for me, the story is heart wrenching and makes you want to melt into a puddle of excitement and shipness
Okay, I don't know how to start with this... First of all the concept is unique, definitely not new, but it is a very unique concept. Unfortunately, from what I read and observed from the story is, that the realism is definitely not an aspect that's very prominent, everything happens too fast, and it's very straight forward but for me the pacing is too fast, the details on the characters aren't very fleshed out, from what I read. The side characters seemed too unrealistic and very unlikeable, the MC and FL as far, as I can describe we're decent? For me I feel like the FL just popped out of nowhere, there was no hints, no past relation and felt fake. I mean who just pop out of no where just cause a woman you don't even know want to commit suicide, I get that it's fiction but the way the FL was introduced, was sudden and it really felt unnatural. Also the word "feminist" always rubbed me the wrong way, Im NOT a hater for feminist, but they have a reputation for hating on the opposite gender :/ The way men were described here were just horrible, not every man has a cheating, cheap, sex driven, money and fame hungry personality. If the FL really advocate for equality, then please do not describe men as a typical hentai character. I have not read that far yet, but the feel of the story feels unrealistic and cliche, but the story has a very unique concept. Again I don't hate you Author, in fact I still like the story but the way it was presented could have been better. Also the typos and punctuation, comma, spelling sometimes we're a bit off, I'm not a grammar person but I did notice it. I will still support the story. Please continue the story. thank you. Also every story, for me is always unique in its own way :)
Rant: I started reading this expecting to love it. What's better than a badass lesbian? However, I found that the writing was sorely lacking. For instance, in chapter 4, you see a doctor checking in on his patient. You are then immediately told that this doctor is a disgusting rapist and that the nurse is a crazy killer. And the MC knew this by his voice???? Everything was so abrupt and random. It was like the author thought "Hmmm what are some of the most disgusting and vile things a human can do, and then tell the reader that they did them without any warning, so the reader will HATE these characters and cheer for the heroin." I couldn't be invested in this story at all because there was so little imagination and build to the plot. And I found myself barely able to understand the story do to poor writing skills. I know what it's like to be a young author and to not have much experience and that it's very hard to write. Personally, it was hard to comprehend what was happening. (On that note, the pacing was non-existent). There was so little that made me want to feel anything for these characters because they didn't seem to hold any depth to them what so ever. I think it's a nice idea but the execution was not it. -I know this rant might be all over the place, I am just really disappointed. I REALLY wanted to like this, but I could barely read it :(
Honestly, not the best story I’ve read. Characters are flat, plot is a bit dull, and scenes are over exaggerated. It could be better and I’m sure with an editor, sorry could be better.
This book is just amazing, how could someone write such a book. The storyline is stable and you can connect with the main character and Zoey is funny and just a overall perfect charcter. I can only say read this book or you will miss out on something amazing!
I really like this novel pls dont drop it😊👌, FL is a badass that wouldnt be under her husbands crotch unlike other novels out there for once there's actually someone who wrote something like this no idiot FL who would pe pushed down by an abusive husband the cliche story line of having an overbearing handsome ML fuck that do your thing pls dont copy those retarded stories.
By far the best book on this whole app. I honestly can't wait for more. It reads exactly like a manga, except it's a novel. I really hope the author publishes this and I can get it in hardback.
In all honesty, I admire you girl. You have such a creative and delicate breath and your story had me hooked with the first chapter. I quite honestly can't thank you enough for uploading your work. I really can't wait for the next chapter comes out and then some... Without further ado, you are awesome, love the story, keep up the great work. And I am glad to be reading your work. Also, I'm not being a kiss-as* 😗, I'm just stating my opinion in review. I don't know the update schedule, but I hope the book doesn't end soon. Hmm. Cheers!!
Mani love her so much I hope she fine her luv very so and save her I hope she can get to her because it would be bad if she did not get to her and
This by far is one of the best books that I have read on this app. I love that the female lead in this book actually uses her brain, unlike other female leads that immediately forgive the people that have wronged them.
I really like this story and I’m glad the author is editing it and fixing their mistakes. But it's really good, there's an unexpected twist ever turn and the protagonist and her friends are the most savage people ever! The characters also seem to deepen and the imagery and grammar has improved immensely! So I would say give it a chance maybe after the editing if you have a problem with errors but still, it's still pretty awesome.
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Ok so this book is one of the few I read. It’s funny it's got nice characters and even though I prefer it not to be in an anime setting I still love it. The grammar needs to be fixed and so do the spelling in some chapters. But I have seen worse. I also love where the story is going and how it gets better and better as it goes on.
It's absolutely great. This makes my day whenever I see it update. If you're looking for a great story to sunk your teeth into then this is for you.