Magical Cosmic
Victor Petard Asterisk was just an explorer, like many others. Roaming unknown parts of the galaxy, seeking the answers to Humanity’s greatest mysteries among the stars. One day, he chanced upon an unnatural wormhole that brings him to another Universe.
A Universe filled with magic and wonder!
“Hah! With my advanced technology, who would dare challenge me?”
“You there, savages! Still using bows and swords? Better go back to farming in the countryside!”
"And you! What's with that backward magic staff? Use mine instead and witness its power."
Filled with determination and experience, from years of exploring, Victor will seek out the unknown and unravel the deep mysteries held within this strange Universe.
Follow Victor’s journey, as he lays down a legend that will echo throughout the Multiverse and last for eternity.
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Hi there, Here I'm back with my shameless review for my own work. This novel is my second creation, I would say. So it should be better that my previous one. As usual I will still be making a Sci-Fi vs Fantasy setting. Kingdom Building will be happening later on. I know that the prologue might be a bit info dump but it was needed later on. Of course, I will still try to improve more than ever before.
After reading two chapters, I realized this is a worthwhile novel! I included it in my library to enjoy the evening reading, with a cup of tea and bagel. This is the most! So appreciated by bibliophials! Good book in the evening! Find! 5 stars! I will not write about the merits and possible mistakes. I’ll read more, add a review! In the meantime, I want to express my admiration for the author, for such an amazing book !!! Cool!!!
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Here's your worst review, good job. The mc with his 160 IQ somehow managed to be a retard. The saving the little girl was so fucking cliche you might as well make him actually be a prince, better yet why not her a princess too? The way you write situation is very annoying too. Here's an example of what it feels like: "MC could run five miles." "No, actually MC could run 10 miles if he wanted to". It always sound like you're contradicting yourself jesus christ, just write it as it is.
Very good story so far. Mc isn't a wuss or a pushover and at least he has the ambition to become something like a lord. I hate mc that do not want to become 'king' but somehow still become and then they b*tch around how they didn't wish for this.
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Depois de ler dois capítulos, percebi que este é um romance que vale a pena! Incluí-o na minha biblioteca para apreciar a leitura noturna, com uma xícara de chá e pão. Este é o máximo! Tão apreciado pelos bibliófilos! Bom livro à noite! Encontrar! 5 estrelas! Não vou escrever sobre os méritos e os possíveis erros.
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It like the mentality of the protagonist is of current society , he glares at a robot,he goes in a market which is exactly like our current stores,talkes about uploading consciousness but has to walk to a store and they need bot guards with plasma rifles, also the store robot has a submissive voice, more like exact ideology of current world with high technology even that technology is thought with pathetic standard ,I m only giving it 3 stars on 3 Ch if it improves I will Improve the rating.
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So far it seems to be getting better, thanks 🌄🌈🌝🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀✈✈✈✈✈✈🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀
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The story had a very good start, there were some chapters which had me worried for the development of the stories, like in first town and casual day. I wont comment on grammar as i focus more on other aspects of story. the author already laid a groundwork for a good world so he should keep in mind of that. I would remind the author not to go in the direction of know it all and clever type MC without laying groundwork to make believe. If harem or romance then should have a good development like in some love at first sight. The villains and competitors should also not be some fools and should have some character. The author should not be discouraged by some comments but rather strive to improve his quality, I believe this story has a chance for good development.
Its great so far should give it a try.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................